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Abandoned Harry Potter and the Future Remapped by Shezza88 - R

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Anonymous, Jun 8, 2005.

  1. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    its a grey line in any time travel fic. He's not born to THAT woman, since he crossed into a diff. universe when he traveled back and altered things, since in his time.. blah blah blah.

    I just remembered paradoxes are a BITCH to explain.. so screw it. lol
     
  2. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    that is very true....see if it was the i'm my own grandfather thing then i can manage to keep reading it but it's i'm my own father....thats just wrong....
     
  3. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    This was, and remains to be one of my favorite stories...the battle scenes were nothing but magnificent, well done, and the magic much more on the scale of things I'd see in the Potterverse...not this shitty "IMPEDIMENTIA" at people. The Harry/Lily was alright to be honest...and I think the addition of Bellatrix and Narcissa as parts of a relationship somewhat ruined it. I wouldn't have minded them as his little slaves ;). The insane chapters seemed to just be filler content while he scrambled to make more ideas, and the recent chapters have been rather rushed.
     
  4. Vecna

    Vecna Fourth Year

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    In one of his AN's he said he thought he was going to slow and was gonna speed it up. :?
     
  5. Anonymous

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    This was in the authors profile,

    Thought you guys might like to know if you already didn't
     
  6. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! i really loved that story... NOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooo!!!
     
  7. Gawl

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    yea but im very sceptical about that one, mainly cause bellatrix was spelt incorrectly in the BIO.
    but hell lets see!
     
  9. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    All they have to do is redo those crack-induced chapter at the end then continue forwards. The rest of the story is fine.

    Aparently Shezza got pissed off at people having a sad over the whole Harry/Lily pairing... well, dont fucking read it then!
     
  10. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    hip hip hurray!
     
  11. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    There is a copy of this story in the DLP.net FFAs archive v.09, see my thread:

    [ http://forums.darklordpotter.net/viewtopic.php?t=1659 ]

    --bornagainpenguin (who is combing through the board in a mad dash to archive what he doesn't already have)
     
  12. flameclaw

    flameclaw Squib

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    does anyone know where you can read the whole story? i read part of the rewritten version and enjoyed it
     
  13. scaryisntit

    scaryisntit Death Eater

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    Read the post above yours... bornagainpenguin specifically states where it is.
     
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  14. Brian64

    Brian64 First Year

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    Yeah, and back in 2006 it probably led to the story.. but now it's just a 404.
     
  15. scaryisntit

    scaryisntit Death Eater

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    Oh, my bad, I didn't try the link. I know there was an update of it recently-ish but I don't recall which section of the forum it was in.

    So, can an older user who remembers it post the link?
     
  16. richardl

    richardl First Year

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  17. Brian64

    Brian64 First Year

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    Thanks, but I tried the rewrite and it's full of errors. Christ, even a firstie knows it's Avada Kedavra, not 'Advada'.. (and the hits just keep on coming). Besides, there's only 10 chapters in the rewrite & it sounds like there's a hell of a lot more in the original.

    What gets me is the amount of Deja Vu I was getting from reading the story. The whole disco battle scene looked very familiar. I'm trying to think of the story I saw it in.

    As for the Yahoo group. I get a 'member's only' message, and if there's a way to apply it's sure isn't obvious from that page.

    I sent Shezza a pm on ff.net. I'll see what response I get.

    Brian
     
  18. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    ...

    You do realize Shezza is an active member on DLP, right? She'll probably laugh when she reads this thread.
     
  19. Brian64

    Brian64 First Year

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    <Shrugs> Nope, why would I know that? I think if I had a thread devoted to my story I'd be subscribed to it, and would make an effort to reply if someone asked where to find it.

    Anyway, that's good news then as it doubles my chance of getting a contact. I'm not going to lose sleep either way, but I am curious whether a redo fic with H/Lily can work.
     
  20. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    o_o

    Because her current WIP, the Denarian Trilogy, is being posted on DLP first before she posts it on ff.net.
     
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