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Complete Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure by JBern - M

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by jbern, Sep 1, 2007.

  1. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    Hashasheen: Photobucket account, bro'.

    EDIT: HA! I knew I wasn't imagining things. This is off-topic, but does a 'Vote Now' tab sometimes appear instead of 'Save' when editing their posts?

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  2. Dark Belra

    Dark Belra Minister of Magic

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    I always get that as well. So, I'm not imagining it either...
     
  3. Portus

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    You know, I hadn't even thought about Hermione and Dumbledore fitting the bill. The whole love potion and Obliviation thing happened so long ago (for the reader) that I'd forgotten that it was only the previous summer for Harry, and Bungle was just a few months' time, leaving him back at the castle in October, still unhappy about Hermione, Ginny and Mrs. Weasley.

    And by the way, I was also sad that Moody died, as he and Kwan are really good at "motivating" Harry (read: kicking his ass), but we still have Kwan. And as for chapter 9, with Harry wanting to joke about three guys at a table but only four legs between them... that made me laugh out loud, which is never good when you happen to be at work, and your job includes very few laughs.

    Hey, I inserted a spoiler! Kudos to the Luddite!

    Looking forward to the next installment of TLIL.
     
  4. Hashasheen

    Hashasheen Half-Blood Prince

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    :confused:, for some reason, the pics placed here dont come out full sized.
    Edit: and I still say its Lupin.
     
  5. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

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    Oh

    Oh yeah! xD That DID happen didn't it?

    >> Methinks a reread of Bungle may be in order, I can't remember the beginning of the plot. (Well, I can now, but the sentiment remains)
     
  6. Howdy

    Howdy Dark Lord

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    Looking back on it, at least Baba Yaga didn't demand that Harry impregnate her as part of his payment.

    That would just be weird.

    Imagine a whole clan of illegitimate Potters all over the world.

    On second thought, that would be pretty awesome.
     
  7. Hashasheen

    Hashasheen Half-Blood Prince

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    :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke:
     
  8. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    He's already started said clan, with Lauren, Thundercloud's daughter.
     
  9. Howdy

    Howdy Dark Lord

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    Which was sort of my point.
     
  10. Kardikek

    Kardikek Groundskeeper

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    The lord of murder shall perish
    but before his doom he shall spawn a score or mortal progeny
    chaos shall be sown from their passage
    so sayeth the wise Lovegood
     
  11. masteraleph

    masteraleph First Year

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    No! Bad Kardikek! No mixing the Prophecy of Alaundo and Harry Potter, unless the fanfic actually calls for it.
     
  12. Averis

    Averis Don of Delivery ~ Prestige ~

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    ...what the fuck?

    <filler>
     
  13. kmfrank

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    !!!Baldur's Gate!!
     
  14. Janus

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    You know, for this to work we really need some murdering. In gratuitous amounts.

    Jbern! H4lp! Your audience needs you!
     
  15. TheDefiantOne

    TheDefiantOne First Year

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    I betcha Tonks will be involved in this "loss" of the homogulus. She'd be very happy to help Dumbles fuck Harry over
     
  16. Warlocke

    Warlocke Fourth Champion

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    Obviously you are unfamiliar with this word... which makes me wonder why you didn't just, oh I don't know, check the fucking story in order to get the spelling right, rather than just make a wild guess.
     
  17. Joschneide

    Joschneide Groundskeeper

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    Anyway, Jbern, wonderful story. As for the latest chapter it felt rather abrupt and rushed. The Baba Yaga storyline felt as if you didn't care much for it and it was more a means to an end in finishing this story in a relatively quick manner. The humor was, per usual, done very well. Still not loving the 1st person perspective but the storytelling continues to make me read. Hope the kid's well.

    And time to go back to lurking.
     
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  18. Agreed....More murdering, Goblins are fun to watch die, maybe even a little "action" with Hermyfunbags just for shits and giggles (and the greater good)
    :mid6
     
  19. Blaise

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    I'm sorry - is that a trademark symbol by your user name?
     
  20. Rayndeon

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    Gasp!

    You haven't played Baldur's Gate before? I can't imagine life without it... quick, buy a copy of it and its sequel!

    RPG Heaven, my friend, RPG Heaven...
     
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