Naw, that ain't him. The guy who writes Shinobi Wars is a big, tough guy. That little twig couldn't possibly be him.

 

Geor Sama is my legal name, just not my internet handle.

 

Such a nice lot ain't ya...and I guess since I got the next two dozen chapters for SW on my HDD that I'm the same Geor-sama as who wrote it. Or I killed him and took his laptop.

 

Glad you like it. Randomly mentioned in an email with a friend, I metioned HP and they said 'oh, well try DLP' So here I am...

 

I'm really curious, at the end of the saving Jiraiya arc, you had Tsunade save Hanabi with the plant, then you changed that. Why?

Now she kills the boatman and the plant doesn't work. How does she save Jiraiya? Or are we supposed to keep wondering?

It might be really obvious, like I've just missed something.

 

Jolly Rancher
A little, which is why I turned up.

sincostan
Why? Because I thought it added more to the story, you'll realize the longer you read this that I'm not always nice to the characters.

How she saves Jiraiya...you are suppose to keep wondering, because she hasn't done it yet. All she's done is figure out how to slow the spread of the chakra poisioning.

 

You invoked the Code of the Sith... with Kiba. I don't think this is a forgivable offense.

Other then that the chapter was great. Oto super nins were overpowered methinks but they wouldn't be interesting otherwise. Am I correct in assuming they are

Spoiler

Jutsu-less?

Hanabi/Ino training was entertaining, though the lack off Tenten/Unity content was somewhat disturbing.

Maybe it was my computer but what was with spacing after every apostrophe 's'?

 

Kalas

I invoked the Code of the Sith? At what point, cause its escaping my memory.

Super nins? I perfer ZOMBIE nin...but anyway, I suppose they would appear Super/overpowered at first apperance. Just wait and answers will turn up in a chapter or so.

Tenten/Unity and their lack of apperance is covered next chapter.

And no, its not your computer. For some reason the spacing after the apostrophe 's' is completely screwed up. I shall have to fix that.

 

Well paraphrased but still...

Spoiler

Turning back to the impassive looking man, Kiba narrowed his eyes. Agitation turned to anger, anger turned to hate and hate turned to power and Kiba hurled himself into the battle.

Also the Kakuza battle was great.

 

Ah, I suppose I did...huh, wasn't even thinking about it.

Also, glad you enjoyed the Kakuzu battle. It was sorta fun to write and I get another Jinchuriki to let run loose in the Narutoverse.

 

Alright since your here I was curious, that dream sequence with Naruto going batshit crazy on the Kyubbi and butchering everyone was awesome, can you drop any details on if we might be seeing something like the four tailed state or possibly further?

 

We might see something, but not for a while...but you'll see tiny hints I'm sure.

 

Wait, this is the fic with the Unity angle? Fuckdammitgodanusshit! I wasn't reading on the basis that this was an entirely separate fic that turned me off fairly early on with weird plot points, despite the rave reviews. D= Instead its one of the many that were lost in the great battery purge of 07?

*sigh*

Well, I know what I'm doing for the next few days.

 

wild guess...eating leftovers?

 

Pft, I wish. Leftovers rarely survive 24 hours in my house. -,- No, it will be the stove or the microwave for me. Maybe some bread, maybe some cold cuts, but I'm not getting my hopes up.

 

Kakuzu vs. the Sanbi Jinchuuriki was beautiful.

Chapter 15 is up.