It really isn't very good and perhaps by taking the advice from people on here you could adapt your plot bunny into a reasonable story. I will admit a bias since it's a Voldemort centric fic. 1/5

How long before she takes down her work and announces that she has given up writing?

 

Eh, she'll probably post some note in her story saying "BTW, don't go to darklordpotter! (note the exclamation mark) They were mean to me and my story." Then she'll have a bunch of other DLP rejects review saying "Ya man I know how you feel, they banned me once just for making an intro, I just said hello, wtf!?"

Its either that or another DLP parody story.

 

So I deleted posts.

Mostly, I left only the posts in which there were a review and/or a rating, plus the banned guy's post and Xiph0's warnings -- I like the whole dissuasion thing -- plus Amer's sheep pic because his other posts were among the best.

I also left Glernaj's posts because the OP was answering them, although I'm pretty sure he never read the story.

I deleted all of Knox's posts except the one in which he finally remembered he was posting in "For Review", and not in "Forum for Practising Tardspeak and Acting Like an Internet Tough Guy." Thanks for the compliment, Knox, though.

I deleted the pic-spamming posts.

Although it was somewhat interesting, I deleted Tehan's post -- he was accurate about the origin of the word "masterpiece", but sadly, as it was, his post remained irrelevant. Plus, you need a standard, and after once or twice I stopped trying to decide which posts were worth keeping and which weren't. So review/rating it is, even if the post sucks otherwise.

I left the OP's posts because it was her thread, after all. I think it's 'her', right?

Thread left in For Review for another 24 hours, because it wasn't here long. And I like the new, low-fat version.