Got nothing against you with your other comments, but this was written just after HBP was released.

 

I honestly couldn't make it through this fic. Why the hell is it in the library? The writing is stale, the dialogue seems contrived and stilted, and the entire story just seems... atrocious. I can understand it might be difficult to write a relatively canon post-HBP fic, but damn it, this is just fucking terrible, even in comparison to DH (which I couldn't stand).

Evicting this from the library would be the best thing that one could do to this fic.

 

I suppose at the time the new stories threads were created straight under the categories without the need of going through the 'review' section...
There are quite a few stories in the library that would hardly get a 2/5 if they are posted for a review now.

And on the topic - I find as well the story lacking, certainly it doesn't deserve a place in here...