Title: The Lust of Harry Potter
Author: DobbyElfLord
Rating: T
Genre:Humor
DLP Category: Humor
Pairing: Only in Harry's Imagination
Status: One-shot
Summary: One-Shot - The curse scar connection flows both ways. What impact could it have on Voldemort? A silly little story from a plot bunny for my daughter. Or it could be a warning.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4890206/1/The_Lust_of_Harry_Potter

An actual submission on April 1st. Nice humorous one-shot about how Voldemort gets screwed over by teenage hormones. And his efficient remedy.

4/5.

 

Spoiler

“How am I supposed to ward against a teenage boy’s libido? It never stops!” Voldemort asked in desperation.
“Marriage did it for me,” Will Bulstrode volunteered.

I rotfled.


It started well enough, but ending was kind of letdown. I didn't notice any spelling errors so if there were any they weren't really annoying.


Overall 3/5 + 1/5 for the line in spoiler tags. 4/5

 

Nothing much to say about it except that it is in fact humorous and neatly written. Not bad at all.....
4/5

 

Funny premise, but the ending was very unsatisfying; granted, it was for his daughter, but it would have been nice to see LV's demise in some humorous way. 3/5

Someone has a story (chem prof, I think?) where Harry and Hermione use a sex ritual to destroy LV through the bond, as he can't stand the pleasure involved. It's smutty, but I can't remember if it's funny.

 

It was Chem Prof. And I don't recall any humor in that story. It was more of "Oh, and then they immediately left their wedding ceremony to have sex. And Voldemort died."

 

I was amused. 4/5 and agreement to the Dark Lord in Training sentiment.

 

More proof that Steve Martin is right.
Comedy is not pretty,and short story writing is harder than screenplay rewriting.

I had a giggle, but it could have had more umph.

 

It was okay, the premise was funny, though the ending was rather abrupt and the story felt rushed. 3/5

 

Humorous, but nothing special.

3/5

 

It started out reasonably humorously and then it just got worse and worse and worse and finally culminated with a terrible ending. I don't think I even smiled at any point while reading it, save perhaps the DE comment about Draco.

It would have been 3/5 if the ending hadn't been so shit, as it is it gets 2/5 for ruining what could have been a moderately amusing tale.

 

Slightly amusing little fic, didn't expect much from it since the summary mentioned it was for his daughter. Still, worth reading just for that one-liner.

3/5

 

This was fairly average. I enjoyed it, but there was so much more that could be done with this concept.

3/5