Excellent chapter. I haven't read Dresden past book 2, so I have no idea whether this Mab lady is canon or not, but if she isn't I liked her character immensely.

Also the ending... Yay Harry has some fun.

Excellent chapter.

 

Plagiarizer fails at plagiarizing!

Code:

diff IdiotsPlagerism ShezzasWork > PlagerismRealDiff
cat PlagerismRealDiff |wc
    768   24145  134686
#Except they're almost all just one word  changes!
mv PlagerismRealDiff PlagerismRealDiff.txt
gzip PlagerismRealDiff.txt 
mv PlagerismRealDiff.txt.gz PlagerismRealDiff.txt.zip

I tried to upload it for you as a txt, except:
PlagerismRealDiff.txt:
Your file of 131.5 KB bytes exceeds the forum's limit of 19.5 KB for this filetype.

So here it is as a gzipped file.

Feel free to use it in a response to the author of this... Monstrosity.


As for the story...

I think that this chapter, like all of Shezza's work is amazing.

Earlier, Shezza hinted at our dear Headmaster being descended from Christ. I was kind of expecting something on this. Perhaps a divine intervention, or just a comment from Maeve or Mab.

Another thing, I interpreted Amaris' response about it not killing her for a while in the context of the implicit question of whether Harry could punch her... From this perspective, it probably means that she was fine for a while without medical attention. I'm very skeptical of permanent damage being done. She could even cut the parts of her body that came in contact with iron off and then regrow them.

 

She hinted that he was descended from Meciel's human family,but it was subtle.

 

This isn't the first time someone's tried to rip of Shezza. I recall a similiar weak attempt on his Stargate story.

 

I totally guessed it. It just seemed to abrupt for Amaris just to die there. Glad to see Amaris inherited Harry's talent for escaping death.

 

I think Shezza should address Amaris's medical situation here since it's a little confusing to many reviewers. Is it meant to be ambiguous, or is she still dying (even if her would is in stasis)?

 

It's pretty clear to me.

 

*points at his sig*
...I don't even know how to feel about this.

On one hand, I want to cry since I'll have to change my sig. Being connected to THAT in any way leaves me feeling dirty.

On the other hand, someone's actually stealing my primitive photoshop work. It's that questionable kind of pride that I feel right now too.

 

A strongly worded letter?


Look everyone, Amanda is here too.

 

Nah. Lets go with Spanish Inquisition. Nobody expects it.

Isn't that site some kind of Harry Potter RPG forum?

 

Heron? Amitiel?

Amaris? O wai-

Tell me where and when and I'll help with the lynching.

 

I just love the way the "author" doing the plagiarism couldn't even muster up a simple find and replace. Seriously, just do a find on "Harry" I'm not sure I can help lynch that person. Violence against retards and all... On a brighter note, I've been loving Denarian Lord, and to me, it just seems to get better.

 

The original paragraph, from the story thread, reads:

So yeah, now it is pretty clear. After revising, because readers complained it wasn't clear in the draft.

 

Guys, about the RPG site - I've been in contact with the admins and they're investigating it now. It's all been taking care of so we can all relax.

 

No going super saiyan on his ass?

Also, I like your sig. Very classy.

 

Blame Jon. He does good stuff

 

What model/actress did he use?

 

Not a clue. Ask him?