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The Salvation War by Sturt Slade - M - Original Work

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by ray243, Jun 24, 2009.

3.4000000953674/5, 5 votes
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  1. The Fine Balance

    The Fine Balance Headmaster

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    Jul 28, 2009 #21
    It's interesting, well written, well fleshed out...it's just, what is fleshed out is rather boring.

    It's just too one sided, basically. It's depiction of Satan and his minions too one-dimensional. Childish, angry, petulant GOD? - meh. It's portrayal of humanity is too optimistic, and thus contradicting with the other two. So, 3/5.
     
  2. ray243

    ray243 Seventh Year

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    Jul 29, 2009 #22
    Well to be fair, the depiction of God and Satan in all the bibles is pretty one-dimension to begin with. :p
     
  3. Sankaku

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    Aug 24, 2009 #23
    The first fic was a bit one sided - only 3/5 but the second one is much better and a 5/5
     
  4. Mercenary

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    Aug 31, 2009 #24
    If there was a God he'd have a sense of humor. One word: Platypus. You just dont see that in the Bible cause who the fuck would want to fear a god that laughed.


    I've read the fic on and off at times, if you want Hell getting its ass kicked from here to eternity go for it.

    Robert E. Lee shows up too...
     
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