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Harry Potter And The Beginning by Radagast - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Randeemy, Apr 16, 2006.

  1. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Title: Harry Potter And The Beginning
    Author: Radagast
    Rating: T
    Genre: General/Humour
    Ships:Will be H/Hr when he gets through the years
    Summary:Harry's first year at Hogwarts. Philosopher's plot. Minor H/Hr. Harry is more powerful in his use of magic. This fic is also a bit darker than Book One.

    Link http://fanfiction.portkey.org/story/5289


    Another AU. Should really be a seperate forum for these. This was the first AU year 1 I read, since to me, it wasnt a repeat of lots of other stuff, I found it really good. Harry is powerful, but not mentally so. He is pulling off 5th year stuff. Stunners and that when required. Also has one particular special ability.

    The sequal (year 2) has just been started...
     
  2. Promios

    Promios Fourth Year

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    .....nope
    It ruins the whole fic if he is placed in Gryffindor...
     
  3. parselmaster

    parselmaster Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    It doesn't quite ruin it. Just turns it off a bit. It isn't like most fic don't have him in Gryffindor.
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Heh. I've actually read this. It seems to be get alot better as it goes along, since Dumbledore actually told him the prophecy at the end of first year. Training and stuff ahead I guess...
     
  5. rj_stone2

    rj_stone2 Seventh Year

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    I don't know if enough is changed here to really call it an alternate universe. It's basically Philosopher's Stone but:

    - is poorly written
    - Harry buys what the author considers to be "cool" t-shirts
    - Harry doesn't like Ron as much, and is (hamfistedly foreshadowed as) pining for Hermione
    - Harry can do wandless magic
    - Harry can do more powerful spells
    - Despite the last two items, Harry never does anything differently than how he did it in canon.

    The plot is PS by the numbers.
     
  6. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    Poster above me nailed it. This is a fairly well-written fic, but there's almost no difference between it and PS. I think it may even have the same amount of chapters. No idea why anyone would want to re-read PS with only a few inconsequential changes.

    2.5/5
     
  7. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Typical Portkey.org fare.
     
  8. Kthr

    Kthr Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    Lol. This it the truth about half the fics out there. Especially the rewriten ones.
     
  9. Perspicacity

    Perspicacity Destroyer of Worlds ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Pretty much this. Neo Harry ducks punches. He meets up with Hermione early on, but it doesn't make any difference. It's pretty much the PS timeline, but tweaked to match Portkey's target audience. I couldn't get past the sorting chapter before getting bored and moving on to something else.

    Recycling Bin material at best. 2/5.
     
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