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Hero Training by YamiPaladinofChaos - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by AbyssalDaemon, Oct 20, 2006.

  1. AbyssalDaemon

    AbyssalDaemon First Year

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    Title: Hero Training.
    Author: YamiPaladinofChaos.
    Genre: Humor.
    Rating: T.
    Status: Oneshot.
    Pairings: None.
    Suggested category: Humor/Parody
    Summary: We all know Harrry needs to be trained to fight Voldemort, and we all know that Dumbledore is the one to do it. A rather... different look at Dumbledore's version of training.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2401701/1/

    Found this while searching for a fic it was written before HBP came out so it's Au.
     
  2. Cthulu

    Cthulu Unintelligent Bigot

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    Okay, THATS hilarious! :D

    But it's a bit TOO obvious whats it's a crossover with :p

    Anyway, a good read even though it's a bit short, being only 744 words...
     
  3. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Not that funny and far too short to be worth it.

    2/5
     
  4. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Yeah, it's rather too short to be so... average.
     
  5. PsyckoSama

    PsyckoSama Groundskeeper

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    chuckle worthy but no big piece of art
     
  6. thapagan

    thapagan High Inquisitor

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    A quick laugh, lets keep it if there is room, Maybe we should have an end of year house cleaning vote. It is easy to say this story is good and that one is bad, but sorting them from best to worst should make for a lively debate.
     
  7. HardcoreHobbit

    HardcoreHobbit Second Year

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    Unimpressive. Far too short, and not that funny. Earned one or two chuckles, but no more than that.

    2/5
     
  8. Mage

    Mage Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    so so, as stated its really short but it got a laugh or two out of me.

    3/5
     
  9. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Amusing, but it should have been longer...maybe actually see Harry fight Voldemort o_o
     
  10. Sepanto

    Sepanto Groundskeeper

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    Brought a smile to my face, but not spectacular.
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  11. huntedorange

    huntedorange Seventh Year

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    made me chuckle but not much else. 2.5/5
     
  12. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    This old one-shot is mildly amusing in some places and irredeemably stupid in others. It felt like the author wrote it in the space of five minutes. Given that he's written 314(!) other crappy, little drabbles, he probably did.

    1.5/5 - not even bin-worthy
     
  13. Matian

    Matian Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    This. Half-assed puns are funnier than this story.

    1/5
     
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