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Complete The Denarian Lord by Shezza 88 - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by XxEnvyxX, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. MellowYellow

    MellowYellow Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    That's great but most people the start trilogies from chapter 1.
     
  2. KrzaQ

    KrzaQ Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Should be a question mark.

    Doesn't really make sense, he needed to transform into a bone-wrym to achieve that just two years before.

    It's awesome to see a longer update. I'm just a little sad that it's coming to an end. Can't wait for another chapter, though.
     
  3. Dethklok

    Dethklok Order Member

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    Frakking awesome. First rate. No real complaints, seeing as this is fresh water from Shezza after a long drought.

    Keep it up, bitch.
     
  4. Sauce Bauss

    Sauce Bauss Second Year ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    follow =/= start :rolleyes:

    Can't wait to see the Dumbledore/Voldemort confrontation. :awesome For some reason I feel as though Dumbledore will be crippled in this fight though.
     
  5. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    Harry is going to have a nasty surprise when he has his "final battle" with Voldemort and learns he blew up the wrong locket.
     
  6. Torak

    Torak Death Eater

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    Voldemort vs Dumbledore round 2. Fuck yes:awesome
     
  7. Innomine

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    This one promises to be far more interesting than the first too. I'm actually apprehensive on how this one is gonna end.

    Does that make it sound like I know what is going to happen? Because I do!

    This just makes you sound fucking retarded.
     
  8. Anya

    Anya Harley Quinn DLP Supporter

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    You made me laugh. :awesome

    Dumbass.
     
  9. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    He has progressed more than a little bit in those 2 years.


    One must wonder how stupid Voldemort really is. Dumbledore is keeping Harry's darker tendecies in check, by killing him Voldemort is left with an unrestrained slightly insane, incredibly powerful, smart, talented, and deadly, Denarian Lord who has proven to be the match of all of his fellow Denarians and Maeve.
     
  10. ChaosGuy

    ChaosGuy Unspeakable

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    Match? The fact that Harry is alive and they aren't would strongly imply that he is their better.
     
  11. KrzaQ

    KrzaQ Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    On the other hand, Harry still isn't a match for Voldemort and his recklessness does him more harm than good. *If* Dumbledore dies, Harry not only loses the Order but also any chances to reconcile with Scrimgeour.

    Harry a match for Maeve? In case you don't remember, if not for a stroke of luck, Maeve would've killed him.

    And about the progression: he evolved as a character and he progressed much, magically. If that was the case also for his body, some foreshadowing would be in order, imo.
     
  12. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I think you people underestimate Lord Voldemort.
     
  13. Kang

    Kang Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    There hasn't been much in terms of Voldemort activity. Either that or he has something massive building up off-screen.
     
  14. KrzaQ

    KrzaQ Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I just can't wait to see the duel between AD and TMR. And I hope that Harry will be involved somehow (maybe have him disarm LV somehow making him leave without the Elder Wand? ;) ).
     
  15. lucis

    lucis Seventh Year

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    Epic, Shezza, epic. Or at least, momentarily about to become epic.
     
  16. Rehio

    Rehio Bad Dragon ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I wish more people would write Dumbledore like you do.
     
  17. Jibril

    Jibril Headmaster

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    Epic update is awesome.

    Scanners are indicating that the Clash of the Titans 2.0 has massive amounts of epic win and :awesome

    I have one question. Will Amanda kill something? A duel between her and Bellatrix would be sweet. Killing Malfoy would also be sweet.

    Should be exclamation mark at the end.
     
  18. Rehio

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    Well if Molly can do it, Amanda certainly can.
     
  19. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    The chapter is good, though I cannot help but think Dumbledore is acting a little too irrationally. I would think he could keep his head cooler, even when being taunted by past failures. But maybe he's more like Harry than he pretends.

    Voldemort really isn't acting intelligently, he has the wand. He could have killed Dumbledore when he was unguarded, and now there's going to be an epic battle. Would have been nicer to see a more logical Voldemort, but I guess the current one is okay. His scheme seems to make some sense, at least.
     
  20. JWH

    JWH Unspeakable

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    And it would be a better death for Bellatrix than the canon one...

    EPIC update, I can't wait for more, but I fear the day the trilogy will end. Hopefully it will continue to inspire omakes, or even fanfiction.
     
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