Title: Harry Potter and the OFSTED inspection
Author: Ravenclaw's Graduate
Rating: K
Genre: Humour
DLP Category: Humour
Pairing: None.
Status: Complete
Summary: In his sixth year at Hogwarts, Harry is faced with an evil greater than any he has seen before, an evil so huge that all wizards, whatever their loyalties, must band together to survive it... COMPLETE!
Link: ff.net

Okay, this is an attempt to make up for the absolutely awful fic I put up (on the subject of that I didn't see the last chapter before I put that up.)

Right, so if anyone has been to an English school you will realise the terror of OFSTED inspections. They are actually evil. But that's all explained in the first chapter. Other than that it's quite funny just as some light entertainment and it is probably better if you've been subjected to an OFSTED inspection. I especially like the ending. I dunno maybe a 3.75/5

 

Now that's just ridiculous.

Looks like you linked to the third chapter, though.

Edit: Nevermind. Looks like the story itself gives out all the information. Convenient.

 

I honestly tried. It's not at all interesting, and it's a fairly horrible premise. Perhaps I could understand if it was completely AU, but Harry is halfway through Hogwarts by the time they decide to integrate the inspection. And the OFSTED inspectors are immune to magic? That's just preposterous. Then Draco is suddenly changing his courses so that he can be in Hermione's, and he suggests a truce because he doesn't want Hogwarts to close. Nearly everything in this story is awful, and I wouldn't recommend it to anyone.

1/5... and only then because the writing wasn't riddled with spelling mistakes.

 

It didn't work.

Awful premise and not even funny.
2/5 because there is worse.

 

You have two awful fics to make up for now, but stop trying. You are absolved of your sins, there's no debt anymore, just leave this section in peace. thanks.

 

Lol Andro.

And yeah, I think I actually preferred the OTHER story you recced.