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Abandoned Dakaath: Prince of Darkness by LT2000 - M/NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by LT2000, Jun 7, 2005.

  1. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Yeah let Fenrir join the party.

    Harry definately needs someone as crazy as he is :) Maybe you could have him and Fenrir get into a killing contest at some point... You know, raid somewhere, whoever kills the most people wins...
     
  2. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    yea have Fenrir join Harry.... Enough of this pansy school girls let a true blood lusted warrior join him. sure Remus probabally is even less likely to join Harry but... Fenrir, Remus.... Fenrir, Remus. IU'd take greyback over lupin any day.

    hey become we can do a Fenrir and Tyr thing have Greyback bite out dumbles withered hand
     
  3. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I think the only character I cared much for out of HBP was Fenrir, even with the pathetic name (i mean REALLY do they fucking rename werewolves when they get bit or something?)

    The man is the embodiment of an evil werewolf, he's more evil to me, then Voldie.

    Fenrir, bites children, kidnaps then, eats his prey..

    Voldemort. Does nothing. has followers that get their asses kicked by children.
     
  4. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Is that approval, then? :p
     
  5. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Indeed...I'd like to see Fenrir at his side, those two could wreak some major havoc together.
     
  6. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Too bad Fenrir's probably gonna end up killing Tonks in canon (or turn her into a werewolf) in order to incense Remus to the point of having the werewolf against werewolf grudge fight.
     
  7. Contempt

    Contempt Third Year

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    Sounds good to me.
     
  8. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I disagree. To much of a side-story for JKR to do... Keep in mind she has to have Harry kill Tommy and the Horcrux's.
     
  9. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Maybe in the final battle Fenrir and Remus will have a showdown.
     
  10. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    How the heck should this fit in the 7th book, I mean we have Horcrux, training and final battle between The One and Voldemort.
     
  11. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    Maybe JK will pull the cocks out of all her orifaces anbd actually write a decent final book....

    But that may be too mcuh to wish for...
     
  12. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Godamn right it is, you're one of the few authors I'd trust not to screw that up
     
  13. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    ditto
     
  14. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    I killed Moony. :(

    Oh well, chapter should be going up here directly. Just got another page or so to write.
     
  15. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Don't feel too bad. YOu had to do it for the sake of the story. :(


    ANd your story is now better for it hopefully :D
     
  16. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    And posted.
     
  17. Hubert

    Hubert First Year

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    What can I say? A brilliant chapter, the battle lived up to my expectations. You've certainly opened the door for a very evil Harry. I'm busy at the moment but i'll give a more detailed review later.
     
  18. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    BRILLIANT!!! I have one question actually, are you going tohave Grindelwald and Kiaren play a larger role in the future? I think its just so cool to have tigers that can breathe fire and ice :wink:

    ALso, I love this story!!!


    Lastly, I love the line, "Have a taste of the caliente, gringo!" by Alberto Rodriguez. CLASSIC Line!!! :wink:
     
  19. Western_Frontier

    Western_Frontier Second Year

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    Does the dance of happiness...

    A whole chapter of killing.... The goodness!!!!!!
     
  20. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    very nice chapter, it was nice to truely " see" Zharrghast agian and the comments between him and Harry after Dumbledore appear are absolutely hilarious. I am a little bit upset about moony's death but you did pull it off well an dit helps the story more than hinders it so oh well

    Please don;t say the Chaos power of the heir of Grindelwald and the vessel of the fallen god so powerufl the elder gods feared him and kkicked him out was not enough to kill Tom. Sure he is a chaos element him self but that would just be way to far fetched
     
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