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Tom Riddle's Diary

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by T3t, Jun 23, 2011.

  1. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I'm getting slightly conflicting information on when it was created, both in terms of what year and in what order relative to Pervell's Ring. Most say it was created in sixth year though I found a source saying fifth year, and none of them had direct quotations to either the book or an interview.

    Similarly, I get the idea that Pervell's ring was made during the summer break between fifth and sixth years, but how did he get away with underage magic use - plot hole or something?
     
  2. Anarchy

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    Tom was two years older than Hagrid. Hagrid got expelled in his third year, so Tom was in his fifth year when he made the journal Horcrux from Myrtle (worth noting that he made the Horcrux without killing Myrtle himself, the basilisk did it.*)

    Now it's known that Tom wore the Gaunt ring around the school and during his conversation with Slughorn about making a 7 part soul. He took the ring off after it was a Horcrux. This can be extrapolated to mean that he already had one Horcrux (the diary) and was curious if he could make a second (the ring).

    *It's been said that JKR is going to tell us the process of creating a Horcrux and the spell involved when she releases her 'long planned' encyclopedia (pottermore?)
     
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  3. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    I did a timeline for that once, for something I was writing. I can't find it at the moment, but I'm pretty sure I based it on this (or at least came to the same conclusions). I have the complete deduction below, here's the short version.


    Variant A: Tom murdered the Riddles and stole the ring the summer before his fifth year. During his fifth year, he asks Slughorn about Horcruxes. The Diary was created at the end of his fifth year. Problems: When we see Tom in the CoS memory, there's no mention of him wearing the ring. Conversely, when he chats with Slughorn, there's no mention of the monster attacking people either. The atmosphere is relaxed, not tense.

    Variant B: The Diary is still created at the end of his fifth year, but the Riddle-murders etc. happen the summer after that (before his sixth year, not before his fifth year). Problems: It doesn't fit exactly what we are told in HBP.

    Variant C: The Diary is still created at the end of his fifth year, but the Riddle-murders etc. happen when he is 17, before his seventh year. That removes the Underage Magic question. Problems: It fits even less what we are told in HBP, and the deduction isn't as good as the other two.

    So there you have both orders. Feel free to choose :?


    Also, the question is if the ring and the Diary were made Horcruxes right away. I personally always thought Tom knew about Horcruxes already when he asked Slughorn, so it's possible that this conversation isn't a prerequisite.

    Additionally, this kinda depends on how that Horcrux magic really works, which we don't know. To split your soul, you need to murder someone -- yeah, but once that is done, do you have create the Horcrux right away, or can you kill someone at one point, and still put the soul fragment into a Horcrux a year later?

    And how no one noticed: Kill the Trace, and it works. The Ministry might recognise that magic was used at the Manor, but not by whom. Later, when they investigated, Morfin "confessed", and that was that. And magic used at Morfin's shack wouldn't matter, because they'd assume it was Morfin himself.


    ------

    We know for sure:

    • He was born in December.

    • The Diary contains Tom's "sixteen-year-old-self" (CoS), so he made it either at the end of his fifth or at the beginning of his sixth year.

    • Tom says it took him "five whole years" to discover the entrance (CoS), which points to the same time frame.

    • The diary entry where he frames Hagrid, after the Chamber had been opened, is mid-June. So it's the end of his fifth year where the Chamber is opened.

    • In the "summer of his sixteenth year" he tracked down the Gaunts and killed the Riddles (HBP), acquiring the ring. That's the bit where the controversy comes in, because the strict meaning would be that his "sixteenth year" is the year where he is fifteen. Like the 20th century is not the one with 20xx, but the one until 20xx (meaning all dates 19xx).

      This gets muddled a lot. The argument then is that so did Rowling, (did she actually mean "the summer when he was 16"? Or maybe even "the summer of his sixth year"?) but if you start going down that route, you might as well stop with creating a timeline altogether, IMO.

    • Of course, you can now start with absolute dates, which leads you to 1943 (fifty years ago at the end of Harry's second year, 1993): Tom's 5/6 year. And the Riddle-murders took place fifty years ago in the summer of GoF (1994), which means 1944, so it was the summer between his sixth and seventh year (where he then would be 17). The question is whether the latter is actually meant as exactly fifty years ago (the former is).

    • He wears the ring when he asks Slughon about the Horcruxes, so that happens after that.

    And together, you get what is in that link, and what I summed up above.
     
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  4. T3t

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    Thank you very much, Sesc, that's enormously helpful, but unfortunately turns out to be rather inconvenient in all possible ways. For my story, I'd need for him to have created the Diary first, and preferably in his sixth year. As it is, it seems unlikely that he obtained the ring during the summer between his sixth and seventh year, simply because he'd have been 17 by then.

    Does the following seem internally consistent?

    I can explain it away through him obtaining the ring between his fifth and sixth years, murdering his relatives in the process, him creating the Diary horcrux during his sixth year, then asking Slughorn about the question of seven during his seventh year - this way, he already knows about horcruxes (having created one) and this provides a great reason for the ring to disappear. The only problem is I'm not sure if canon contradicts him being a seventh-year during that conversation.

    If there aren't any glaring inconsistencies there, I'll probably end up going with it and explaining the rest away as a creative interpretation of canon history. Hehehe.

    I just realized that the whole thing runs smack-dab into the "horcrux as a weapon", indicating that the diary wasn't the first one, bit but since that was never conclusive, I'm going to ignore it.
     
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    As I said -- since we don't know how the Horcrux thing works, you could get away with creating the diary in his fifth year, and making a Horcrux out of it in his sixth. I don't see that those two things have to be one and the same. In fact, even if you need them to be related, he can still make that diary in his sixth year, theoretically: After all, he is still 16 until December of that school year. Maybe that is helpful?

    And regarding the other thing: Yes, there is something, kinda. Slughorn cites the fact that Riddle is a Prefect as for why he won't want to be caught out of bed. However, we know he also became Headboy in his seventh year; so if that conversation took place in Tom's seventh year, you'd think Slughorn said Headboy, not Prefect.

    Edit: Also, Harry notices that Tom is "by no means the eldest of the group of boys" sitting in Slughorn's room. If he was a Seventh Year, the oldest could only be half year older than him.


    If you want it as close to Canon as possible, I guess you best bet is Diary -> Horcrux early sixth year, talk with Slughorn later sixth year, Ring -> Horcrux some time later sixth year.
     
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  6. T3t

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    Yeah... so I suppose my timeline is:

    Obtains ring summer between fifth and sixth years
    Makes Diary horcrux early in his sixth year, possibly wearing the ring to Slug Club meetings (high density of attacks/petrifications early on? conversation with Dippet..)
    Makes ring horcrux later in sixth year, with some death other than Myrtle (maybe).
     
  7. Sesc

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    I meant the Basilisk attacks, Hogwarts nearly closing etc. still happen in his fifth year, only, he makes the Diary and/or the Diary!Horcrux at the beginning of his sixth year.

    Also, I never was a fan of Myrtle being one of the deaths used to create a Horcrux. In my eyes, that's stretching what we know to far: If it's killing that's splits the soul, then he has to be one who kills, actively. Myrtle died because she happened to look at the Basilisk, not because Tom killed her.

    I suppose using the murder of the Riddles to create the Diary-Horcrux would work. And if you can "save" the killings for later Horcrux-uses, he could also use another of them to create the Ring-Horcrux.


    Not wanting to fuck up your plot, though.
     
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    Actually, that works even better. Myrtle is completely irrelevant to my plot. That's probably what I'll go with if I ever have to end up explaining it in-story, thanks.
     
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    I like that you guys are trying to definitively tie down these events, and it shows to me that there are even more of the subtle inconsistencies in canon than I had recognized. Still, when it comes to writing a fanfic and using these events, you don't need to pull your hair out trying to find exact sequences of events when (1) the author admits she blows dicks at math, has had irreconcilable plot holes throughout the series, and has ret-conned the fuck out of things since DH came out, (b) anything we might know about which murders were used to create any of the Horcruxes is (admittedly, strong) deduction and guessing on the part of Dumbledore, and (c) it's a /fanfic/, for fuck's sake, so take any and all liberties you can either sort-of justify or even outright dismiss with a hand-wave and a cry of "author fiat!"

    How's that for the longest sentence you're likely to read today?

    To contribute and not just take the piss:

    I'm positive Tom already knew plenty about Horcruxes when he sought out Slughorn to ask about the significance of their number. As we know, Tom was always a devious boy, and he would have made certain he had found as much info as he could before seeking another person's input, so of course he would ask Slughorn about them in as innocent and roundabout a way as possible, to keep Slughorn's suspicions at bay. He presents it as simple intellectual curiosity about something unknown, as if he'd just stumbled across this piece of soul magic while researching how best to help the poor or heal the sick.

    And as far as /when/ a Horcrux must be made, I would argue that there's no time limit at all. Think about it - the only requirement for making one which we know for certain is that it requires a cold-blooded murder, an act which tears the soul. We also know that the soul can be reassembled, for lack of a better word, by feeling true remorse, according to Secrets of the Darkest Art. Since even at the end Voldemort scoffs at Harry's suggestion to "try for some remorse," I doubt old Tom ever felt enough to undo any soul tears, and so I'd imagine he could make a Horcrux at any time from just about any of his murders.

    This is sort of contradicted by how Dumbledore and/or Harry surmise Voldemort's use of Frank Bryce's murder to make Nagini a Horcrux, implying that he needed a "fresh" murder to do so. Well, that's never explicitly stated anyway, and it's not as if Voldemort was actively seeking someone to kill; he killed Bryce because the man stumbled upon them in the house. And if LV *did* need a fresh murder, you could always say that this was because all his others were committed before being disembodied by a rebounding Killing Curse at Harry.

    And there's no good reason why Myrtle's death couldn't be used, even though young Tom Riddle didn't kill her himself. He unleashed the Basilisk, which *did* kill her, so of course he's "responsible" for her death. It's not a crime of passion or an accident, and the Basilisk is merely the instrument Tom uses to kill her.

    This is echoed when Diary!Tom orders the Basilisk to kill Harry in the Chamber, though granted, the spirit's incorporeal state doesn't allow for much in the way of another method. Diary!Tom knows that, as a baby, Harry defeated his older self, and obviously feels that killing Harry via Basilisk is the same as doing it with a wand, personally.

    It's echoed again in DH, when LV kills Snape by proxy, this time using Nagini as the instrument. He believes that to gain control of the Elder Wand, he has to kill Snape, and if he thought ordering Nagini to do it wouldn't fit the criteria, he'd have destroyed Snape wand-to-wand without hesitation. This isn't like the "catspaws" favored by the White Court in The Dresden Files, since LV is directing his surrogate killers instead of trying to have them inadvertently, unknowingly or even reluctantly do his bidding.

    It all comes down - again - to intent, see. Tom meant to kill someone and did it by Basilisk. Voldemort meant to kill Snape, and did through Nagini. Hell, he might even argue that he killed Dumbledore, because it was done on his direct orders. Draco - and ultimately Snape, or so LV believed - were his instruments, acting to carry out his will.

    This isn't the case when it comes to killing Harry himself, but I could chalk that up to Voldemort's ego and the lingering humiliation of being brought low by baby Harry and his Mudblood mother.

    Also, I agree that Tom was probably a Sixth Year when he asks about Horcruxes and is wearing the Gaunt ring, because of the things already mentioned. It also subtly shows Tom's charisma and drawing power, in that he is revered by the other boys despite not only being probably half-blood, but being younger than some as well.

    So yeah, it's nice to hash out the time-line as best we can, but if you want to write it a certain way, then do it and just make your story as internally consistent as you can.

    There's plenty of leeway when talking about Horcruxes anyhow, since what we know in detail is scarce. I doubt there's a potion involved, and I don't think there's an actual ritual either. The only "ritual" we see in canon is Voldemort's rebirthing one, and then only if you squint. Wormtail essentially cooks up an uber-potion that would best be described as "Disembodied? Amaze your friends and surprise your foes! Brew yourself a not-quite-good-as-new meat-sack in three easy steps! Requires two helpers - one willing, one not so much - and a parent. Patent pending." Wormtail recites some very specific lines in the course of this, so that's why I would classify it a quasi-ritual.
     
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    We'll be getting the "official" method of creating a horcrux when JKR's new website comes out, but I don't really care about contradicting that.

    And, now that I think about it, having the ring made first solves some other problems though I guess it might be considered lazy. Speaking of which, does anybody want to beta for me? I'd like some help fixing my story up for whenever the DLP Romance contest roles around (and I do hope they get around to it eventually) in addition to working out some plot points. I'd be willing to help beta one (or more) of your stories in return.
     
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    I don't think this is a contradiction at all. Additionally to what you said (LV didn't exactly search Frank Bryce out to kill him), I remember reading that using Nagini to kill Frank Bryce only reminded LV that he could, in fact, make Nagini a Horcrux, to get his coveted number of seven Horcruxes. Sure, that was Dumbledore talking, but in such matters, I'm inclined to believe what Dumbledore says.

    @T3t: I'd volunteer as beta, if you really needed it. Pretty sure there are people better suited for that job, though.
     
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    Rowling actually told who were killed for the horcruxes in an interview.

    Diary - Myrtle
    Ring - Riddle Sr.
    Locket - Random prostitute
    Cup - Smith
    Diadem - Albanian farmer
    Nagini - Bertha Jorkins

    He probably created his first horcrux before killing his father, or he'd would've used one of his grandparents for the diary. This would mean his first horcrux was created before he talked with Slughorn, so the 16 year old Voldecrux wouldn't have known his future self created several more. It does seem to be the case, that the creation of the horcrux doesn't need to follow directly after the murder. Voldemort was able to wait untill after his conversation with Slughorn to turn the ring into one. His use of Jorkins however seems to indicate that the window of opportunity can pass with time, although it's possible he simply didn't have the chance to create his final horcrux before he killed her.

    Fun Fact: You have to use a spell and a ritual to create a horcrux. This means Harry never was a true horcrux. Or a faulthy one in any case. I'd like to think this is why he got those headaches and was able to look into Voldemort's head. Normal living horcruxes (Nagini) were probably different, which is why Voldemort never realised Harry had a piece of his soul.
     
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    Argh, my brain. I think at this point I'm just going to go with what works best for the story and blame JKR for all the historical confusion. If it turns out to be slightly AU later, I don't really care.
     
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    Well, I assumed you were doing that anyway.

    However, I still prefer the timelines I gave above to mere random orders of what happened when, and I disagree slightly with Portus as well. The fact that Rowling has inconsistencies in her books doesn't make attempts to make sense of it invalid. There is still merit in trying to piece together how it happened, and trying to stick to Canon as much as that is possible is still a worthwhile goal.

    And finally, facts are facts. I'm all for ignoring the DH retcons and Rowling's more stupid out-of-book moments (such as the magic-gene, or in this case, Myrtle's death -- I'm sticking to what I said, her death doesn't work as a Horcruxable murder for me), but if you can write your story in such a way that you incorporate those facts (and you can almost always), I see no reason why you wouldn't do that.

    Deliberately changing stuff for no reason is the equivalent of writing an OC for no reason, when there are plenty free Canon characters that would do fine. It's something I dislike in stories.


    Edit:
    Which can be a valid reason, yes. I usually go somewhat out of my way to make it fit, others less so; but anyway, I was talking more generally, I guess.
     
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    I'm not doing it for no reason; using one of the given order of events would require a lot of wrangling of the story in other places and if I can avoid that with a few slight changes I will.

    I could use one of those time-lines, but it would probably fuck up the flow of the story it I had to work around them.

    But yeah, in general I agree with keeping things as close to canon as possible if there aren't good reasons to change it.
     
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