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Almost Recommendable Volume the Third

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Antivash, Aug 11, 2010.

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  1. ViolentRed

    ViolentRed Professor

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    I think he's only been described as having "dark eyes" before they turned red.

    I like to think he had dark green eyes, making him and Harry a little more similar.

    Red eyes, charming? Have you been reading Harry/Voldemort slash?
     
  2. Socialist

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    Really? Not endless pools of emerald?
     
  3. Bittersweet Freedom

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    I don't believe this has been posted yet.

    Title: That Old Fashioned Family Nobility
    Author: ckret2
    Rating: T
    Genre: Drama & Family
    DLP Category: General
    Pairing: None
    Status: One-shot
    Summary: DH spoilers Nineteen years after Voldemort's fall, the Malfoy name is far from admired. As Scorpius starts school, he struggles between family tradition and doing whatever it takes to regain respect for the Malfoys.

    So, stating the obvious, this is a Scorpius-centric one-shot. You have been warned.

    (But seriously, this fic is pretty good. It actually makes me feel okay with Scorpius' existence. The author's writing style, voice, and characterization is just so realistic and moving. ;_; I wish this had been continued; the ending was so abrupt.)
     
  4. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Except for the fact that if Scorpius and Albus had been over the age of 13, I'm pretty sure the author would have shipped them. Ignoring the 'Rita insinuates 11 year old Albus is randomly gay' subplot, decent story.
     
  5. Nargles

    Nargles Seventh Year

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    I found this one some time ago, and I couldn't find it anywhere around here, so check it out.


    This story features a Pureblood!Harry that's raised by the Black Family. Lily's a pureblood (obviously) that was adopted by the Evans, but doesn't find out about her heritage until she's married to James.

    The fic has some Ron and Manipulative!Dumbledore bashing. The Dumbledore bashing is cringe worthy at times and some of the dialogue between characters can also be awkward.



    However, the story does get better with time, and the Unspeakables seem to have a major part in how Harry is raised.

    I should also point out that Lily is not the heir to any of the Founders or Merlin or anything stupid like that. Harry is not some Gary Stu, Hermione doesn't seem to have much of role, and Ginny is... well, let's just say she's fucked up in the head. (I really don't know what to make of her.)


    Overall, I would give it a 3.5/5 because of some cliches and the dialogue, but so far, I'm enjoying this.

    Oh, and the story has 100k+ words.
     
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  6. Carmine

    Carmine Unspeakable

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    Yeah, I'm following this also. It's... decent, but nothing special. Pureblood society is well thought out.
     
  7. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    Dumbledore has just 15 minutes to draft the quarterback of the future.
     
  8. silverlasso

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    I tried, I really did. It ended up being too much for me around Chapter 4.
     
  9. Nargles

    Nargles Seventh Year

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    I know. :)

    Some of it is painfully awkward to read, but if you somehow manage to get to the later chapters, then you get some interesting development with Snape, Sirius, Ginny and the Unspeakables.
     
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  10. Stalin's Pipe Organs

    Stalin's Pipe Organs Auror

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    Meh, I don't even attempt to read anything under 4/5.
     
  11. Socialist

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    A somewhat strange fic. The first few few chapters suck ass, containing self righteous ranting of the worst variety, along with independent!Harry clichés. After the crack starts however, the story turns mildly amusing, even entertaining at times.

    Stranger still, that it's written by the bobmin team; I've never been able to even start any of their other stories. I guess they've got some talent at writing crackfics.

    3.25/5
     
  12. Perspicacity

    Perspicacity Destroyer of Worlds ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Have they quit fanficauthors.net? You'd think that they, of anyone, would groove with the new FFA site policy: "Must be on Kinsfire's favorites list--preferably as a Harmony shipper--to receive an invite."
     
  13. Portus

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    Yeah, but by whose definition? The OP for that rec? That's too subjective for me; I usually read through the summary given, and if it doesn't sound like pure shit (read: the vast majority of fanfics I've ever read), the pairing isn't something I hate, the story has several chapters and has been updated recently, then I boldly -

    - open it in another tab and bookmark it under a FFN folder to possibly take a slightly longer look at later.

    Eh. I'm lazy and time reading new stories not in the DLP WbA is time I could be perusing DLP, Slate, TVTropes and Wikipedia, just to name a few.

    The Bobmin team has had a lot of success in writing unintentional crackfics for years now. I'm sad to say I enjoyed the fuck out of more than one of them when I first discovered fanfiction.

    "Bitter, party of one? Your table is this way, please."

    Seriously though, there was a time when it would have meant something to be an author on that site, but unless I'm missing a ton of quality material there, that simply isn't the case anymore.
     
  14. Sesc

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    Well, I made it one chapter farther than silverlasso. I like politics more than your average person. I don't like nine-years-olds discussing it seriously. Bah. Why not simply have them bragging about their parents like all kids do? Instead, I get to read their tactical analysis of the latest schemes and plots that are going on, and ideological discussions on the topic of blood purity. Come the fuck on :|

    Edit: And I swear if they smirk one more goddamn time I'll do something violent.
     
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  15. Trig

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    Started reading this, typical cliched indy!Harry for the first few chapters. I was about to quit after Harry stunned the whole Order one by one from behind - Including Dumbledore with a stupefy - but I soldiered onwards. The moment Harry started summoning limbs and other body-parts in chapter five wasn't really funny but the scene was amusing enough.

    This scene really cracked me up :awesome
     
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    That sounds retarded.

     
  17. Trig

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    It is. It's at most a mediocre crack fic in all but name. Like I said, depending on your type of humor you could get a laugh out of one or two scenes, either because they are somewhat amusing or because of how hilariously bad it is.
     
  18. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    On Saying No:

    I stopped reading that when it became apparent that it would be the lazy version of Super!Harry. No actually interesting powers, no compelling villains, just Harry wandering around in a crowd of idiots having everything go his way. Seriously getting Dumbledore by ambushing him from cover with a Stunner? That's just fucking retarded.

    I could believe Remus Lupin and most of the rest of the order were enough of a joke to be taken out like that in a certain type of fic, but no Dumbledore should be that incompetent.
     
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  19. Sesc

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    So I finished Causality Chain, and it's a really, really odd story. It made me actually think about why I like what I do, because I love and hate this story equally.


    I love the world, the ideological struggle, and the many purebloods I get to read about. And I hate how it's presented.

    I like Hermione Muggleborns getting knocked down lots of pegs. I like purebloods dominating the world. I like the self-contained world, the underhanded politics, the inevitable balls, the latent racism, the arrogance, the sense of entitlement and elitism. But I like it for all that, not because I somehow managed to ignore the fact that it is. And the latter is the feeling I get in this story. The author tries her damn hardest to make it appear like it's totally not there.


    There are countless instances of that. Three notable people renounce the "wrong" and "magic-defying" light families, becoming the "lost sons" that now return to their true homes, seeing the errors in their ways. Or the fact that every time I read the lines "they aren't like their parents", I roll my eyes -- because, well, they are. It's hilarious if you read that line about the Lestrange Twins, and a few paragraphs later they discuss cursing mudbloods.

    And finally, the ungodly, staggering amount of Dumbledore-bashing is rooted in this problem as well, because after deciding that the "dark side" was completely right and not at all bad, bigoted, fanatics, or whatever else negative attribute you want to attribute to them, the author has the obvious problem of Dumbledore, who's got valid points in Canon, having to be wrong about every single one of them. And so, she has to pummel the shit out of him, literally speaking, in order to bury that truth.

    And I think that's my biggest criticism. This story has a take on the HP world I really like, but it would have been so much better -- perhaps truly great, even -- if Dumbledore was used to present a viable alternative and opposition instead of being used as a caricature to display everything that in the author's opinion is wrong with Canon.

    That within the story, Dumbledore might lose that ideological debate is whatever, but here, he never even had a leg to stand on to begin with, and that's just sad. It kinda cheapens the victory, if that makes sense. As I said, I like the entire pureblood thing because and in full acknowledgement of the fact that it's supremacist, elitist, and not at all fair to those not belonging to the pureblood circles. It's the same way I like Evil!Harry stories because Harry is evil, and not because I mentally removed all opposition and came up with the conclusion that he really isn't evil at all.


    But in this story, I just don't think the author has quite realised that distinction. Even though it's so obvious to me :confused: Or perhaps it's just a DLP-tinged view of things?
     
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  20. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I understand what you're getting at, Sesc, but personally, Pureblood apologist fanfic rarely does it for me. There are only a few instances where I've read a decent interpretation of it.

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6671596/1/A_Necessary_Gift_A_Harry_Potter_Story

    This does a surprisingly decent job of it, despite being a rewrite of a mediocre fic. There are some "uh, what?" bits, but there's a decent amount of intelligent discourse on the subject, where everything is not black and white and and none of the sides seem to be completely correct. The buildup to that part is kinda slow, though, you have to get to Hogwarts to see what I'm talking about.
     
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