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Your pet peeves in fanfiction

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Mock Moniker, Jan 31, 2011.

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  1. LittleBlackGoldfish

    LittleBlackGoldfish Third Year

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    When "the power he knows not" turns out to be some special ability Harry has and no one else.
     
  2. TheWiseTomato

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    Isn't that kinda the point? :confused:

    Or do you mean something retarded like having multiple magical animagus forms that he can pull off partial transformations of and use all of their natural powers in human form?
     
  3. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    It's not the point. Tons of people have the power of love but it only matters that Harry has it, since he's the one in the prophecy.
     
  4. TheWiseTomato

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    Ah yeah, canon-wise, I agree. I was thinking about fanfics where the authors want Harry to have a more tangible power.
     
  5. LittleBlackGoldfish

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    The second bit, could have been clearer about that.

    Giving Harry a more tangible power invariably ends up badly done because it becomes about Harry's Super-Cool-Special-Power instead of a struggle of competing ideologies. It removes what depth there was from a, let's be honest, fairly shallow story already.
     
  6. Heather_Sinclair

    Heather_Sinclair Chief Warlock

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    The inability of just about every Death Eater to finish his or her incantation.

    Avada...

    Ava...

    Avada Keda...

    Sectumse...

    Nobody ever gets to finish it. :confused:
     
  7. Alive and Free

    Alive and Free Groundskeeper

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    Defence Against the Dark Arts being shortened to DADA both in speech and text.
     
  8. redshell

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    I'm of two minds on this one. If in written format, that's fine, like when they receive their schedules or someone is establishing a meeting place, because abbreviations are acceptable there.

    On the other hand, if someone thinks or talks about it as DADA, then yeah, no.
     
  9. GrayFox

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    is DADA canon or fanon?
     
  10. Alive and Free

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    I'm pretty sure it's fanon. I think it was just shortened to Defence in canon. Right?
     
  11. Joe's Nemesis

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    It's canon. HBP includes it. JKR said that Snape was making comments on Harry's inability to use nonverbal spells, doing so in each class of D.A.D.A. (Chapter 12).

    Of course, that's the only time it was ever used, but why should that stop it from being used every other sentence in fanon?
     
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  12. redshell

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    I am reminded of part of the reason why I'm so leery of reading Naruto fanfiction these days. Character traits are taken to extremes, and mentioned at the drop of the hat.

    What I'm referencing is Naruto's apparent love of all things ramen, Kakashi reading porn, and Shikamaru finding everything troublesome. Or paperwork being the mortal enemy of any kage ever.
     
  13. lilandriss

    lilandriss Second Year

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    But isn't all that true? Naruto *is* obsessed with Raman, Kakashi is always reading porn and Shikamaru finds most things to be a 'drag.' Then there's 'Pervy Sage' (can't think nor spell his name right now) and his obsession with women.
     
  14. GrayFox

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    Jiraiya is his name, though I'm sure I f'd up the spelling
     
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  15. Moridin

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    Uhh... do you mean Jiraiya? If not, I have no idea who you're talking about.
     
  16. Tasoli

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    What is raman?


    Some writers does that and I always hit the X when I read this.
     
  17. Christinathewitch

    Christinathewitch Second Year

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    When writers does that I always hit the X button as well. I'm serious, it's one of the few mistakes I can't stand along with misspelling names and definitely/defiantly.
     
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  18. Hero of Stupidity

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    AK-ing somebody... either in speech or description..
     
  19. Captain Trips

    Captain Trips High Inquisitor

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    Extreme character bashing, when this happens I hit the X.
     
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  20. thejabber27

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    Killing characters that have nothing to do with the story and have everyone be heartbroken by it.
     
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