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Shezza88: Regarding my inability to finish a story

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Shezza, Dec 12, 2005.

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  1. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    Yeah they were. They kept on calling him the chosen one remember? And the new Minister kept on trying to get Harry to show public support of the new regime, that was where that atrocious "Dumbledore's man" crap came from.
     
  2. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Jo should die for that sickly sweet scene. If i wrote it the minister would be like:

    " We'd like you to support us Harry, for morale - you understand " The Minister with mirth, but was cut off as cold steel slit his throat. The last picture he registered was two emerald orbs staring at him in calculating coldness.

    That would almost... almost... redeem her for one of the chapters of back story... she has to suffer for the others though... .damn its a miracle I finished that bullshit.
     
  3. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    Quite. I only had that book to read on a fourteen hour flight from Germany to Hong Kong. All the movies were crap, except for Fight Club, which I had already watched about 7 times on the HK to Germany flight.

    Needless to say, I was brain-dead by the end of the damn plane ride.

    I found myself agreeing to the sentiments of our cause more and more over the course of that 14 hours.
     
  4. Aquylyne

    Aquylyne First Year

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    you know i would be interested in a story where Harry takes the minister up on his offer. Say he wants privleges, training with the best ministry fighter (unspeakables) while using his fame to promote the ministry in the war. conflicts with rons jealousy and we all know where ron goes hermione will be attached to his penis. you could even fit in the plot with the love potions, or a secret marriage contract dumbles was working on with ginny, not being manipulative but seeing how close they were stepping in setting it up like siriusor james would have. They were purebloods after-all.the only way out of the contract is death... idk something to think about. i havent seen this done yet anyway...
     
  5. Rache

    Rache Headmaster

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    How about the Ron and Hermione abandon Harry on their horcrux hunt idea??? None of the stories on this concept are well written. Add a soul merging and a cheating Ginny.....An epic fanfic can be written.........:)
     
  6. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    ...Really?
     
  7. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Why is The_Santi's thread exempt from this rule? :(
     
  9. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    So is a six-year bump a record?

    Do I win a prize?
     
  10. Anarchy

    Anarchy Half-Blood Prince DLP Supporter

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    The prize is you have to write more for Denarian Apocalypse.
     
  11. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Denarian Apocalypse is a troll. One of Shezza's finest.
     
  12. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    You remember in Resident Evil Apocalypse, where the city has been overtaken by zombies so the army builds a massive wall around it to keep the zombies in?

    It's just like that.
     
  13. Cyclops

    Cyclops Unspeakable

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    And look how well that turned out for them.
     
  14. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    When I first clicked on this thread I read the OP before the date of post and thought this was Shezza trolling people desperate for Apocalypse.
     
  15. Rapscallion

    Rapscallion Groundskeeper

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    Soul merging and epic????:confused:
     
  16. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I had to delete half of his posts in Santi's thread. I'll pm him. If he doesn't stop posting without thinking about it first, he won't stay any longer.

    Meh. That one is semi-moderated. I just delete its worst posts.




    Oh, yeah, locked. For obvious reasons.
     
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