What do you think Harry is going to find in NY, while looking for an old man that got killed as a price, but his death would help save a lot of people?
Uncle Ben's sauce?

 

It is good sauce.

 

This probably ranks in my Top 5 Fanfiction list, along with Awaken Sleeper and In the Shadow of Gods. I've been following your story on FF.net, and it was only recently that I hopped on the DLP train.

Like someone above me said, it's really hard to pinpoint mistakes, and any and all have been mentioned before. Still, they aren't that noticeable and annoying, and the sheer epicness of the story drowns them out. I love the Harry and Fury interactions, and the bar was a nice touch. Loki is disarmingly devious

Looking forward to more!

 

I got so excited too.

 

Thanks! Yeah, but I decided a little variety would be nice (EtchedInDiamond is also my FF.net name), so I used a reference to A Knight's Tale instead.

 

Hmm, so I finally got around to reading this story. Interesting beyond belief, and very enjoyable on top of that. Not being very familiar with many of the movies this story is drawing from (as I stopped watching movies and television due to the vast majority of it being utter shit) actually made it more enjoyable for me to read as it was pretty new to me. The character interaction is amusing most of the time, especially when Tony and Harry are interacting, but Harry's lack of questioning, along with his lack of basic knowledge, makes me facepalm at points here.

Still, I've enjoyed what you've done with this story Roarian, and look forward to what's in store.

 

Cheers.

New chapter is a good ways along, so tomorrow maybe?

 

Tony is a fool

 

Dat Dresden reference.

 

It was...puntastic.

 

True, the ending was heading to a heavy punishment direction a bit too much. I didn't expect so much head on tackling of puns in so little space.
Maybe, you know, you could tear apart some of them?

 

That was an awesome chapter. Harry's meeting with Peter was very good. I completely support the violence Barton and Stark used in taking down Tarleton.

 

Damn nice chapter.

Also,

As soon as I read "This is some serious Terminator technology."

I immediately thought of this little gem.

Watch the whole video for maximum lulz.

 

So....you're tying in Spiderman and his stories, with the Fantastic 4 not far behind. This is about to become as twisted as Renegade Cause.

 

I think this is already twisted beyond recognition, and Thor hasn't even arrived yet. Also spiderman is a jerk. Poor Gwen.

 

The FF reference no more meant that those 4 will show up than the Dresden reference means that Harry has to watch out for the Red Court.

 

I can't wait for whatever they decide to put Tarleton's head on next.

 

I'm sure they'll arrange for another human-seeming cyborg. If this was more comics-based, it'd be attached to a gorilla (or is that too retro, now?)

Just be thankful if the head isn't encased in a sphere of resin to be carried around by Janeane Garofalo [my secret ship: the Magician/the Bowler].

 

Last time I checked, this wasn't a HP/Dresden crossover.