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Abandoned Powerful Beyond Belief by fullsailnate - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Raijin, Jun 19, 2006.

  1. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    Title: Powerful Beyond Belief
    Author: fullsailnate
    Rating: M
    Genre: Supernatural/Suspense
    Pairing: Past H/Hr, H/Bella
    Chapters: 3
    Words: 9,174
    Updated: June 14, 2006
    Published: January 29, 2005
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: The fighting is over, and Voldemort is dead. Harry is the savior of the Wizarding World. So, why is he stuck in a tiny cell in Azkaban? And, more importantly, why do Dementors keep dying?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2240299/1/

    This guy is a good writer but his update rates are extremely slow though it is understandable since he is in Iraq(last i knew anyways). The Harry Bellatrix doesn't have isn't really one of redemption so thats a plus as well.


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 23, 2012
    Considering its length I leave it in the Recyclin Bin despite a rating just above the limit (3.57 stars)
     
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  2. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    That's not half bad. The guy pulled off Hellatrix quite well, and a dead Hermione is a definite plus. It's a little early to discern how well he is going to pull off the plot for this story, so I'll follow it until it reaches that point.
     
  3. Myst

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    Was fairly well written and kind of odd. Other than that... good.
     
  4. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Yeah, I've seen this one. It's one from the 'good kind' of super!Harry fics, where the author doesn't even try to artificially induce some kind of drama and conflict, but make the whole story about Harry enjoying every second of being a god (something like nonjon's triology). Always a good thing in this genre.

    Downsides are low word count and slow updates.
     
  5. Lord Apophis

    Lord Apophis Professor

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    Finally this has been updated... I have always liked this story as it is among the few azkaban stories were no one of his friends have betrayed him. I have also always been a fan of Super!Harry fics...
     
  6. Deadman

    Deadman First Year

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    I don't think I've ever seen Dumbledore put into the kind of situation where he is forced to admit his fear of something.

    It was interesting to say the least.

    Infinite magical power + zero control over base emotions = more fun for me.
     
  7. Dragon Watcher

    Dragon Watcher Third Year

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    Nothing like waking up in the morning and saying "God thank you-- Oh wait I mean, Me thank me for this wonderful day!"
     
  8. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    I have to say, this is one of the most original Azkaban fics I've ever read. I hope that the author will expand on the "Avatar Singularity" thing. It sounds interesting.
     
  9. Lord Apophis

    Lord Apophis Professor

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    I also hope that the author explains more about "the Merlin Phenomenon" and "the Avatar Singularity". I think it is a great idea to explain Super!Harry...
     
  10. CGB

    CGB Auror

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    It's a bit short, but I like it. It's different from the usual Azkaban!Harry and that is rare these days.
     
  11. Inquisition

    Inquisition Canadian Ambassador to Japan DLP Supporter

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    Stephen Colbert is... Harry Potter!

    But there is such a thing as "too powerful" even in Super!Harry. This author just ran down that blockade in a '67 Chevy.

    3/5
     
  12. Jenkins

    Jenkins Forum Bike DLP Supporter

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    This fic was a strange experience for me.
    I despise Hellatrix and almost all Super!Harry fics and yet this one is written fairly well. All in all I agree with ip82, it's a fairly good Super!Harry fic where Harry loves his power but just not something I enjoy.
    And I think I just wasted both your and my time writing that. Meh.
     
  13. Goddessa39

    Goddessa39 DA Member

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    Powerful Beyond Belief

    I am quite fond of Super!Harry fics, but Bellatrix is a superficial cold bitch. I admit that using her character is fun and creativelicensing her is something not too often done in a truly good fic. This is worth at least reading though. And in the least, the way the rest of the public view our Azkabaned Harry is something. It's not a truly exceptional fic-mostly because it is not finished. But I like the bare bones.
     
  14. KirijamaScion

    KirijamaScion First Year

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    This is a decent story sadly it seems that it is abandoned.
     
  15. ThunderGod

    ThunderGod First Year

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    Okay...I finally bit the bullet and read this, and found it to be interesting, yet a bit wooden. Strange I know but thats the way I see it.

    As to updateing..lol....try Naia and stories from her can range from months to years before an update:}

    ThunderGod
     
  16. Helltanz98

    Helltanz98 Professor

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    there are better ones, but not many, probably just my distaste of the whole, soul mate shit why I don't like it more
     
  17. mikeuni

    mikeuni Squib

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    Its a good story so far but Not very long and looks abandond so disappointing
     
  18. jjack1003

    jjack1003 Second Year

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    i liked this story. sucks that its abandoned
     
  19. Xiph0

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    This needs a read through and critique by someone that isn't me.
     
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