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Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Jormungandr, Aug 13, 2012.

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  1. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Shit, there aren't that many first-person stories to begin with, let alone make a top 3 with. In fact, the only three I can think of are TLIL, Thunderstorm (my fic), and One of the Many (which seems to be abandoned after one chapter but is still pretty damn good).
     
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    Having seen The Hobbit not too long ago, I'm craving some HP/LotR crossovers. I've only read one or two rather dreadful ones... any suggestions?

    Thanks in advance. :D
     
  3. Ched

    Ched Da Trek Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐⭐

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    Number Games by jbern did a neat job with incorporating flashbacks. Not the best story overall (4/5 maybe?) but it's fresh in my memory since I read it yesterday.

    It's Ron centric and around 15k words long. Present day he's playing the best and last game of his Quidditch Career (he's getting "old" for Pro Sports after a good run). He keeps flashing back to past years/mistakes.

    As for Top 3 stories in first person... hell, I dunno. I can think of a few but none that I'd rate as "Top 3" off the top of my head. If you're looking for some good stories in first person you can always check out the Dresden Files, but if you really need/want Harry Potter fanfics then... yeah, the main one coming to mind is "The Lie I've Lived" which is good but not amazing.
     
  4. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    The thing about first person is that you don't really notice it if it's good first person. That's why you can't seem to recall them. And actually, that's the way it should be. If it fits the story, you focus on just about everything but the POV. Lie is a story from which I've always said that it was not a really good first person POV, so it's interesting that indeed it should stick out so (especially opposed to Wastelands, which has a similar following, but was not on anyone's mind).

    So yeah, there are, in fact, quite a few stories. This is just from the C2:

    Unatoned
    Wastelands of Time & Sequel
    Marie Antoinette
    Ambient
    Incorruptible
    Retsu's Folly
    A Mother-In-Law's Love
    A Clock on the Face of Hell
    Breach of Contract
    By That Last Candle's Light
    Intoxication
    Demon's Feign, Merlin's Pain
    Lost Soul
    Silence Game
    The Lie I've Lived
    Countdown
    For Want of a Wand
    Saving Ivy
    Dagger & Rose
    What Lies Beneath
    Sherlock Holmes and the Ravenclaw Codex

    Surprised? It's about 10% of all stories. Not that much, but not that rare either. As for a top 3 ... well, of those I read and that aren't my own stories (I'm rather fond of the first person in By That Last Candle's Light and Unatoned):

    For Want of a Wand has a mechanically interesting implementation of the first person narrative (might even fit the flashback query!). Then, Sherlock Holmes and the Ravenclaw Codex does an outstanding job on mirroring Sir A.C. Doyle's style. And finally, Intoxication is a oneshot, but something everyone should have read once.

    Those three give a fine overview over how the first person POV can be used, I think. The rest is worth reading too, though. That's why it is the C2 :p
     
  5. MattSilver

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    Thank the German Gods that Sesc finally namedropped my fics - Breach of Contract and Incorruptible - because I was this close to posting and saying, "Hey, they might not be Top 3 material, but they have first person that's not entirely crappy and flashbacks that are even pretty okay! So here, look!" No wait, I'm doing that now. Whatevs, shameless whoring knows no, uh, shame.

    (And of that list, Ambient, Unatoned and What Lies Beneath would be my fave three, by the by. But read them all, really.)
     
  6. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Obviously I'm terribad at this whole memory thing. Matt and Sesc write amazing stories and I'm seconding the What Lies Beneath rec.

    Edit: (Noticed that like 50% of those fics have been written by 4 authors, which, well, DLP C2 and all, but still.)
     
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  7. Andrela

    Andrela Plot Bunny DLP Supporter

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    Not sure if this the right place to ask, but I'm looking for a Death Note fic I read before.

    It was basically about this:

     
  8. Nauro

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    Baring the fact that you were supposed to use a story search section of misc stories*, I'd be interested in reading the story, I think.

    Although
    Couldn't it be argued that he prevented lot's of innocent deaths by murdering murderers? Of course, he was more of a punished after the fact, but some suspected serial killers must have been caught in that killing spree.

    *I hope someone moves this.
     
  9. Andrela

    Andrela Plot Bunny DLP Supporter

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    Ah, I failed yet again at locating the right forum. I'll know better next time.

    Anyway, I have found that fic. Redivivus by Silver Pard
     
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  10. Shymer

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    I'm looking for a post-hogarts story I'm pretty sure I've known thanks to the Almost Recommended threads but can't find it anymore.

    What I remember of it: a few years after book 7, Hermione and Ron moved on with their lives and basically left Harry behind, who becomes depressed and a drunk.

    Draco met him and decide to bring him in his manor to clean him up.

    The pairing at the end is Harry/Daphne. He also has sex with Gabrielle Delacours at some point.

    Harry is Draco's best man when he married Astoria.
     
  11. Styx0444

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    Recently I've been reading 'life is a video game' stories in the Naruto fandom, and I'm finding myself oddly hooked. Are there any HP stories that make a good attempt at it? I'm not opposed to pen-and-paper style systems either, so long as it's not a full crossover, or I don't have to go into it with a lot of knowledge about the game. I've already found Harry Potter and the Natural 20.
     
  12. Saot

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    There's Harry Potter: Game of the Year Edition which is a pretty direct copy of the similarly-named Naruto fic, but it's not very long or very good.
     
  13. Rache

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    I read a timetravel story, where an adult Harry ends up in the body of James Potter when he has an accident during Quidditch. Charlus Potter is a widower in that and there is a new prophecy made regarding Harry. Oh and Nicholas Flamel is also present in that story.

    It's a James/ Lily story, or one can say, a Harry/ Lily one and I can't find it anymore. Help would be appreciated.
     
  14. blitzen24

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    That's Make a Wish, Break a Heart. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6602829/1/
     
  15. Rache

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    Hey @blitzen, thanks.

    Welcome to DLP.
     
  16. NoxedSalvation

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    First person narrative: The Lie I've Lived
     
  17. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    I think I remember reading a story in which Umbrige is turned into a toad by someone. I think she falls in love with Trevor? She is turned back into a human but then she wants to be a toad again, or something like that.
    Don't remember he it was good or not. Any ideas? Which fc was this?
     
  18. Andrela

    Andrela Plot Bunny DLP Supporter

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    Are there any good fics that cross over the Potterverse with Cthulhu Mythos?
     
  19. Perspicacity

    Perspicacity Destroyer of Worlds ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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  20. Mark83

    Mark83 Muggle

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    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6257522/1/A-Fine-Spot-of-Trouble
     
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