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Abandoned Harry Potter and the Serpent of Time by tinkerpixy - PG13

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by tinkerpixy, Apr 6, 2005.

  1. tinkerpixy

    tinkerpixy Guest

    Title: Harry Potter and the Serpent of Time
    Author: tinkerpixy
    Rating: T (PG-13)
    Genre: General/Angst
    Summary: After fifth year, Harry finds his Slytherin side. Headmaster Dumbledore sends him back in time to befriend a sixteen year old Tom Riddle. They build a strong friendship and begin the study and the practice of the Dark Arts together. (Post OOTP)
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2188202/1/


    Checked by Minion, Jan. 6, 2013
    Dead link is dead. If you know where to find another copy of the story, please inform the library staff.
    EDIT by Minion, Jan. 2, 2016
    I added a textfile with the story
     

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  2. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Wow... wonderfull story... been reading it for a while... havent had time to check the newest update though
     
  3. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Very nice, I'm liking it a lot. :)
     
  4. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Great story, I have been following it for a few chapters now. Most excellent work.
     
  5. nightangel960

    nightangel960 Fifth Year

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    nice story keep it up
     
  6. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Good story. Too bad it's abandoned.
     
  7. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    I read this a while ago and liked it heaps, i'm hating the fact that it's been abandoned! death to the the author with my Sizzling Wok of Havoc, i'll fry you worse then burned asain dog with noodles and a side dish of Ginslut.
     
  8. Goddess of Ran

    Goddess of Ran Sixth Year

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    Another good story abandoned. Too bad about this one. Anyway, I hope the author decides to continue it. Would be a waste if the story wasn't.
     
  9. Lord Dragon

    Lord Dragon DA Member

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    good story
     
  10. kmfrank

    kmfrank Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I just read this for the first time, and it surpassed all of my expectations.

    Even after nearly five years since it was started, this is a great story - the writing is top-notch, it's somewhat original, and the characters are both believable and likable.

    It's a shame that this was never continued, but there's enough that it's still worth reading. If you have not read this, do so. Now.

    5/5 from me, even now.
     
  11. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    This was in a original idea that I've never really read before. Despite being abandoned, more then enough to read at 8 chapters that are good sized. The writing is excellent as well. I enjoyed reading this time travel fic which is a gem considering the genre doesn't usually produce such enjoyable reads. 5/5 despite being abandoned.
     
  12. Kthr

    Kthr Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    Evan James Black? Why can't authors choose an alias to harry unrelated with his true name?

    Couldn't really get past the first chapter. The sudden knowledge of occlumency, and the "stay-out-of-my-mind" speech is a huge turn off, and the way Harry just accepted to go back in time to befriend the dark lord without really thinking about it was a really shitty plot device too.
     
  13. Agnostics Puppet

    Agnostics Puppet Professor

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    Really?.... really?

    This story is hideous. The tense keeps changing from past to present. Super Harry from reading books and without any real explanation. Plus like Night Spy said, Harry is just a wee bit too accepting of Dumbledores plan. It might have been decent 4 or 5 years ago, but now its just... bad.

    1/5
     
  14. Anme

    Anme Professor

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    It's not really bad and back when it was written it was good but I can't find myself to rate it more than a 3/5. The plot seems a bit unrealistic.
     
  15. Othalan

    Othalan Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    I know standards have risen in the past few years, but... god damn! If this had been written and put in the For Review section today, it wouldn't last a day before being shit-canned. It well and truly boggles the mind...

    2/5 Decent idea, and maybe even decent writing back in the day, but nowhere even approaching readable now.
     
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