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WIP The Prince Who Was Promised by cxjenious - M

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Cxjenious, May 30, 2013.

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  1. Arrowjoe

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    How big is this time skip we're hearing about?
     
  2. Celestin

    Celestin Dimensional Trunk

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    From 293 AL to 298 AL.
     
  3. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    And IIRC, Cxjenious said that we'd see scenes from throughout that timeskip period. It isn't just a straight hop to "five years later..."
     
  4. Celestin

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    From the last chapter:

     
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  5. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I missed that somehow.
     
  6. Sn0rkack

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    Even when talking about murdering children Twyin comes off like a total badass
     
  7. Probellum

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    So, I don't think anyone else has really mentioned it, but tbh don't feel like looking back over 43 pages of comments.

    Anyway, Cxjenious, I'd like to applaud some of the connections you've made w/ Harry Potter and Game of Thrones. Because seriously, it's kind of surprising how being a Baratheon works. Things like the Coat of Arms connection, for his parents (A Stag and a Lion, Kind of obvious.)

    And then there's things like Harry being compared to Rhaegar. Consider the fact that Rhaegar was "The Silver Prince," and Harry is the "The Black Prince," and it's like a pattern is starting. Also, Harry seems to tend to wear black, but it has been brought to his attention that red is his color. While the most obvious connection is the Red God, well, what other group of people is associated with Red and Black?

    The only thing left is if I'm just seeing things, where's theres nothing, or if I'm actually on to something.
     
  8. Cxjenious

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    I'm glad someone noticed the black and red theme.
     
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    Gryffindor Red.

    Red comet.

    Red wedding.

    AFAIK red represents blood/war. It also represents strong emotions. Rage, hatred, love, etc...

    As for black, are you sirius? :eek:

    There's Castle Black. The Night' Watch are also clad in black.

    That's just off the top of my head. There are probably plenty of other connections.
     
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  10. Cxjenious

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    Black and red are Targaryen colors. The Targaryen sigil is a red dragon on black; Blackfyre colors were the reverse of that.
     
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  11. TMNTurtwig

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    Pretty sure he was being facetious.

    Also, when I think of Black and Red my mind always goes to the Many-Faced God, but that's mostly because of Jaqen's hair. It should be pointed out that the Many-Faced God is also known as the Lion of Night in Yi Ti, a country which is thought to have wild basilisks. If Harry should ever go on a Lannister walkabout then I can't think of a better country for the Black Lion to visit.

    Edit: Ninja'd
     
  12. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I'm re-reading the fic now and you've snuck a lot of extra little bits and pieces into it, Cxj. While we've been sitting around twiddling our thumbs waiting for the next chapter it seems like you've been revising and molding the earlier chapters.
     
  13. Euro

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    Exactly! I really like the little tidbits thrown in here and there. A few little clarifications on some of the discussions here too.

    And in the newest chapter; when Ser Barristan thought Harry meant to overthrow Joffrey and Harry shook his head.
    Little awesome details. Nice touch.
     
  14. Sorrows

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    If there is going to be a 5 year time skip I wonder where this is going to be set in the canon? Joffrey is 12 at the beginning of the series, Harry is 9 now so Joffrey is at least 10, that means that we are going to be at least 2 years after Joffrey lopes Ned Starks head off and becomes King, unless you plan to move the whole timeline back a few years, (or dispense with it all together.) As I've only watched the TV series I'm not entirely sure at what point you are going to springboard your story from.
     
  15. Ched

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    Is it just me, or has the latest chapter replaced Chapter 1 on ffnet? I was going to do a re-read but no matter what I try, I see Chapter 1 "The Price of Fun" as having the text from the current chapter instead.
     
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    Confirmed. Chapter one is fucked--it is actually the latest chapter.
     
  17. Nuit

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    Well that is odd.

    I had just looked at chapter one an hour or two earlier, It was still the chapter one at that time.
     
  18. Cxjenious

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    That was a mistake on my part. I changed it back.

    You've missed some things, I think.

    What that means is, the TV series starts in 299 AL. We'll pick back up some months before Joffrey's nameday, and Jon Arryn's subsequent death, which ties into the beginning of episode one of Game of Thrones.
     
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  19. Sorrows

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    Ahh, cheers for clearing that up, I was wondering what I'd missed.
     
  20. yak

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    I'm still slightly confused. Does that mean that the old timeline:

    Is now this?

    278AL Robert's Rebellion kicks off
    279AL Robert is crowned king
    283AL Joffrey is born
    284AL Harry is born
    285AL Greyjoy Rebellion
    286AL Myrcella is born
    293AL Probably the current date in the fic.
    298AL Joffrey celebrates his 16th nameday
    299AL A Game of Thrones takes place.
     
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