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Almost Recommended VI

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Dark Minion, Feb 9, 2013.

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3.2368400096893/5, 38 votes
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  1. Photon

    Photon Order Member

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    Sep 16, 2013 #581
    I also like this small "truth serum is not a silver bullet" additional oneshot.
     
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  2. Hero of Stupidity

    Hero of Stupidity Villain of Sensibility ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Sep 16, 2013 #582
    I love Rorsch but I simply hate how he writes Luna...


    EDIT:


    So two fics. It's AU with Nevile as the BWL and we still don't know what happened to Harrys parents, yet he still lives with the Dursley and they "abuse" him. he has scars and such. It's short and kinda nice and Dumbledore as a dick is written good. 3/5
     
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  3. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Sep 23, 2013 #583
    That among other things makes me think that if we had an "almost almost recommended" thread, it would be perfect for it.

    An okay time waster.
     
  4. Zvohunter

    Zvohunter Third Year

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    Sep 23, 2013 #584

    Rahkesh, is that you?
     
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  5. Henry Persico

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    Sep 24, 2013 #585
    No
     
  6. Saot

    Saot Groundskeeper

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    Sep 25, 2013 #586
    This story has some wonderfully written magical rituals. Conceptually nothing's terribly original, but everything involving magic has a distinctive style that I enjoyed reading.

    Sadly everything else is decent at best, and there's definitely some dumb parts.
     
  7. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    Sep 25, 2013 #587
    I tried to read this once, but the whole thing with the tattoos at the start struck me as so fucking stupid I couldn't continue.
     
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  8. Hello

    Hello Professor

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    Sep 25, 2013 #588
    Shit reads like a world building exercise gone out of control. Characters are flat and plot reads like Swiss cheese.
     
  9. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Sep 25, 2013 #589
    New rule: if you have to tell the reader it's sophisticated, it's not sophisticated.
     
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  10. Gengar

    Gengar Degenerate Shrimp –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Sep 25, 2013 #590
    Nothing says sophisticated like a classy set of gang tats.
     
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  11. The Iron Rose

    The Iron Rose Chief Warlock

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    Sep 25, 2013 #591
    There's a Saints Row reference to be made here, I feel.
     
  12. Joe's Nemesis

    Joe's Nemesis High Score: 2,058 ~ Prestige ~

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    Sep 25, 2013 #592
    I originally read gang tits. I'm likely to agree, but have no idea what gang tits are.
     
  13. Andrela

    Andrela Plot Bunny DLP Supporter

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    Sep 25, 2013 #593
    I don't know either.


    ...but I'd like to find out. :sherlock:
     
  14. wordhammer

    wordhammer Dark Lord DLP Supporter

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    Sep 25, 2013 #594
    The token female on a five-person superhero squad?
     
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  15. PrometheusII

    PrometheusII Second Year

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    Sep 25, 2013 #595
    I was extremely sceptical at first but the story is not bad!
    Even the tattoo is not a sign for this typical gang-idiot-angst-orgy-thing. Until now, most of it is world-building, rituals, etc. Fun to read if a bit of a guilty pleasure...
    4/5, I'd say!
     
  16. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    ...

    Why can't I stop imagining Kara "Kent" and many of her alternate versions having a five-way with Harry?
     
  17. Nuit

    Nuit Dark Lord

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    Because you've seen too many of megamatt09(?)'s stories?
     
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  18. Tasoli

    Tasoli Minister of Magic

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    Sep 25, 2013 #598
    When you say gang tits this image comes to mind;
    [​IMG]
     
  19. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Sep 25, 2013 #599
    Fuck you for reminding me he exists D8
     
  20. Darth Disaster

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    Sep 25, 2013 #600
    That's... awesome.
     
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