What confuses you? The fact that there are lemons in each chapter and that I think the story is good?

 

God fucking damnit, man. Quality Naruto Fics. QUALITY.

 

It's quality compared to a lot of other shit out there.

 

Fucking ipad. Thanks for the catch.

 

No, it's not. It's just as bad.

 

Whatever man.

 

It's one of those fics that tells you how thoughts and dialogue are presented in italics and bold and so on. Seriously, are these authors incapable of properly describing the act of a bijū talking, or do they genuinely think that simply bolding the words is sufficient?

 

Sure, my YZF R125 is great compared to a bicycle. I'd still prefer driving a Bentley.

There's a difference between quality and 'good if you compare it to trash'.

 

Oh well whatever. I thought I'd come by a bit of a gem and thought I'd share with the class. Sorry I did.

 

If you consider that to be a gem, then you should seriously hold off on reccomending anything else for a good while.

 

Just about every quality piece of naruto work has already been posted here and has been either completed and in most cases abandoned. Also why do you insist on continuing to harp about this story? You made your point a while ago.

 

Normally I think Republic takes being an asshole too far but this time I agree. That fic was super shitty, and your responses have been just as bad. Had you tried to defend the fic instead of whining about all the good fics being posted and shitty sarcasm maybe it could have been seriously reviewed by someone.

On the topic of the fic, the writing is solid. The plot leaves much to be desired seeing as it's basically Sakura's mom being a pedo, but she does help Naruto come out of the academy as a competent shinobi. All in all I'd rate it 1/5, because the writing isn't bad and Naruto ends up a good shinobi after the academy. Minus points for all the fucking child abuse and rape present.

 

The only defense I have for the story is that I thought it was mildly entertaining/ interesting. Which I said at the very beginning. The only responses I got was that story is shitty ok. There was no answer why aside from your review. The rest was biting my head off for posting my opinion of a fic. Your also saying I'm wining because I responded to reviews asking why I bothered putting up a review.

 

I never said you were wining, I said you were whining and you were. Hell you are now. The responses you got weren't favorable, sure, but your responses weren't any better. It could even be argued that they were worse. Hell Cheddar's first response wasn't even that bad, and it could have been a good opening for you to explain why you liked the fic.

Instead you responded with that. No explanation for why you like the story, no actual review about redeeming qualities, hell you could have even said something about how your initial sentence, because lets be honest your initial review can't be called a review, doesn't give the story justice. Instead you respond with that. A wannabe sarcastic rhetorical question about something that does generally confuse most people. Because I think everyone is confused when someone suggests a story that is based around pedophilia.

And this is the sarcastic whining I was talking about. Not once did you actually try and defend your fic, instead you got all whiny about how there is nothing else and sarcastic because we didn't appreciate this obvious fucking gem of a fic that you have presented to us.

And honestly I'm not sure what you expected posting a Lemon fic to the Quality search thread, especially a lemon fic that focuses on Pedophilia. That should have immediately shot warning bells off in your head about how this isn't something you suggest as top tier fanfiction. You fucking idiot.

 

Hey ... fuck you.

/caseinpoint

 

He's almost like a baby Andro, all bark but no bite.


:3

 

Hello again. I'm not sure if this fic was ever recomended here? It's called "Worth Dying For" By Shadow Rebirth. It's being rewritten but the writing is good.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8067258/1/Worth-Dying-For
Naruto is granted almost invincibility by the Kyubi. Which is pretty cool. Seems like the tailed beasts and SoSP are part of some advanced technology, and Naruto finds himself a Tiger summon.
Anyway I think it's worth having a look at.

 

https needs a : in Perspicacity's link.

 

It's like you haven't been here for almost a year. Naruto section of the forums. Literally the third one down is Worth Dying For. Points for finding a fic that is good, but you lose them for not using basic features of the forums.