http://www.mangabee.com/Naruto/678/1/

I was expecting something like this honestly, but still better writing. We are finally getting plot development beyond this huge fucking war.

 

Well that wasn't all that surprising.

 

Zetsu is Kaguya???

The dreams were interesting. I liked Gaara and Kiba's.

 

Godara is dead.

 

Inb4 NarutoxKaguya fics.

 

Too late.

The Rabbit Goddess and her orange plushie sounds hot...

 

Meh. I'd like the stupid bullshit to end and have Naruto kick some ass for an extended period of time, please.

Also Sasuke-Wank-Bullshit is Sasuke-Wank-Bullshit.

Honestly Kishimoto, your crap is just getting worse.

The 'dreams' were mildly interesting. Ino's was Dumb. Kiba's was Dumb. Hinata's was cute, Lee was Dumb. Tenten was funny. Gaara was sad in a bittersweet way.

 

Meh, I don't think I've seen anything from Sakura that would make me think she can Strategize better than Sasuke. Heck, I don't think she's done anything that Naruto hasn't topped. Her one good battle strategy feat was playing possum against Sasori and that only worked because she happened to have an antidote he wasn't aware of. Even then she had no guarantee that he'd try to finish her off up close with his puppet and so it relied a lot on luck.

 

Because Kishimoto has a problem with strong females. They can't be as awesome as the men, as far as he's concerned.

Also, they have to be two dimensional and receive little character development.


If they DO receive character development, it always has to be about their love lives in some fashion or another.

I'm honestly fucking sick of it.

 

Uhhh... Did Kishimoto just break the fourth wall in that Tenten segment?
Or am I reading a bad translation from MangaPanda again?

 

I've read that he's admitted that he doesn't know how to write female characters.

 

Maybe Kishi redeems himself partly by having Kagyua tear Madara a new asshole.

But honestly, there is no reason for Sakura to be so useless. Maybe the issue is that intelligence and cunning no longer plays an important part in the manga. Unless you have the eye of God or the constitution of a demon, you can't do shit.

 

Meh. Of course the character that was just introduced a couple of chapters ago is villain. Wow great plot twist Kishi.

I just want to know what Madara would have done next after the plan. Everyone is asleep dreaming. What does he do since he is the only self aware person in the world?

 

He'd probably link himself to the tree and rule the dream world(s) or something.

 

So he'd be like a god in everyone's individual dream? We've seen that they don't share the same dream world.

 

God fucking damn it. This chapter reminded me of my long abandoned desire to find a decent Loyal!Orochimaru fic.

 

"You should be the one to take control of Team 7", huh? Sasuke wank is stronger than ever. Man, he's such an asshole.

I liked the dreams. Still, I felt pretty bad after reading the chapter.

 

Sasuke actually made me laugh.

 

What is happening? I'm confused.