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The Second Annual Draco Kill Off

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Xiph0, Sep 10, 2006.

  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Continuing the Kill Off tradition, I present the Second Annual Draco Kill Off :).

    From Giovanni's first thread:

    /updated the quote.
     
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  2. Xiph0

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    Hurrah, first entry.

    -Seperate post for my entry-

    Draco was in a good mood as he turned down into Knockturn Alley. He had just insulted two mudbloods in a row, he felt like a thousand galleons at the moment. As he shouldered his way through the alley, he hit something that felt like a giant boulder.


    “Get the bloody fuck out of my way.” He snarl-shouted in his high-pitched, pompous voice. The giant of a man looked down at him with a growl, “Who der ya thin’ you’r talkin’ to, Malfoy?”. Draco, realizing the man wasn’t going to move, looked up and balked. Standing before him was Hagrid, the half-giant professor at Hogwarts.


    Doing his best impression of his father, he straightened up and said with a sneer, “Out of my way, creature.” Hagrid didn’t even flinch, fail. Instead, Hagrid started laughing. Draco’s face went from pale to almost normal-looking in a second flat. Drawing his wand, he aimed it at Hagrid’s chest and incanted “Avada Kedavra!”.


    With a look of complete disbelief, he watched the disgusting lime green curse bounce off the Half-Giants chest and back out into Diagon Alley proper. A scream and thud was heard, but the two people in question ignored it.


    The few hags that had been hanging around the alley cleared off now. Hagrid’s laughing had died off; a primal anger now seethed emplace of his normally cheery manner. Raising a closed fist, he brought it down on the peroxide-infested head of Draco Malfoy. Picking up the downed, would-be abortion, he smashed his skull into the brick wall of the nearest store, watching the skull cave in.


    Hagrid tossed the body over his shoulder. He had been in the alley to buy a treat for Aragog and his family, but a human was better than anything he could buy in that pit of slime people called Knockturn Alley.

    Stepping out of the alley, Hagrid noticed with momentary shock that young Ginny Weasley lay sprawled out on the pavement, her eyes completely blank, and flies buzzing her dead corpse. Remembering the killing curse from earlier Hagrid shrugged, stepping over her, he set off for his cabin and Hogwarts.
     
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  3. Fuegodefuerza

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    Strutting through the vacant halls of Hogwarts, Draco Malfoy walked his Prefect rounds with cool arrogance. He had already caught the little Weasley whore being double-teamed by Crabbe and Goyle, with Millicent Bullstrode in the wings, so the general feeling was that he was having a pretty successful night. As he strolled down the corridor, he heard a frantic sobbing from behind a door, and his hopes raised slightly. Was he about to acquire two busts in one night?

    Drawing his wand in what he thought was a horribly heroic and romantic move, Malfoy busted down the door with a streak of dark red magic, shouting, "Reducto!" He leapt through the opening and found himself standing in a puddle of water. Comprehension dawned on him as he noticed that he was in Myrtle's bathroom.

    "Myrtle! What is the matter with you?"

    A silvery figure, ethereal tears dripping down her face, floated through the stall in front of him, eyes wide behind her horn-rimmed glasses. "Hello, Draco," she sniffed. "There's nothing wrong, except for he just passed by, but he didn't even say hello to me."

    Draco quickly scanned the room, but seeing nothing, questioned, "There was someone here? I need to know who that was, Myrtle."

    Moaning Myrtle looked down at her wringing hands. "There was...someone here, but he made me promise not to tell anyone who he was."

    Draco sighed with exasperation, and ran a hand through his platinum-blond hair. "Myrtle, I'm a prefect. I need to know who was out of the dorms after curfew, it's the rules. Besides, you said that it was a boy, and this is a girl's bathroom."

    Myrtle sniffed at his tone, and tears began to well up in her eyes. Suddenly, one of the sinks at the back of the room began spinning, quickly sinking out of sight. A soft hissing was heard, and Draco began to back away from the gaping hole, wand in front of him. Footsteps sounded throughout the room, echoing morbidly, and the lone torch in the room began to flicker in a nonexistent wind. Transfixed, Draco stared at the pipe as the footsteps came closer and closer, and suddenly a figure began to come into existence. First, black, unruly hair appeared, and a pale face with emerald eyes jutting out followed. Potter.

    Draco's face twisted into a sneer at the sight of his rival, but kept silent in a moment of rare cunning and subtlety to see what the Boy-Who-Lived would do. Potter kept his eyes downcast, and hissed out a sharp note in Parseltongue. A grating noise was heard, and Draco was able to discern Harry muttering, "A godsend those stairs were. Never would have been able to travel to and fro the Chamber without them."

    Draco let out a small gasp at the mention of the fabled Chamber, and Harry stiffened slightly. With another hiss, the entrance was sealed, and all it took was a swift flick of the wand and a slight squelching noise to seal him and his captive inside the bathroom of Moaning Myrtle.

    He turned on his heel, emerald eyes raking across the bathroom, until they lit upon Draco, sparkling with glee. "Draco! My favorite ferret! I've been looking for some test subjects for a few spells, but the first years that I originally used suffered a few...ah...side effects. You know what? I think that you'll suit the role perfectly!"

    Draco shuddered with revulsion, remembering the few first-years that had shown up one day in the Great Hall with great streaks of flesh missing from their bodies, some without various internal organs, and others with gigantic puncture wounds through their bodies. "That was you? Harry Potter, Savior of the Light and Boy-Who-Lived?"

    "Yep. Guilty as charged. Now, Malfoy, how about we get started?" His wand whipped out, tearing Draco's wand from his hand, and, with a quick swish, it was burned to a crisp. The magical backlash from destroying such a potent magical tool was great, but Harry was able to shield himself from it. Draco wasn't so lucky, and was thrown bodily, facefirst into the wall, losing a few teeth in the process.

    Blood dripping from his nose and mouth, Draco wheeled around, only to catch a bright orange bolt of light straight in the mouth. His face slowly began to heat up, and Harry watched in fascination as Draco's face turned from puzzlement, to discomfort, to outright agony. A primal scream ripped from his throat as the bone marrow in his jaw was heated up to an excruciating level. After a minute of this, Harry canceled the spell, quipping, "We can't have you dying yet, now can we."

    One complicated wand movement later, and a black orb exploded forth from the end of his wand, coalescing into a jaw with massive teeth the size of a fist, sharpened to a point. The jaw rushed towards Draco, clamping down on his right arm. Harry jerked his wand, and the jaw responded, wrenching backwards and tearing the arm right out of its socket. Draco's eyes bugged out, and an tortured cry burst from his injured jaw, prompting another round of screaming. Tears of anguish flowed down his aristocratic features, gushing from his eyes, which were filled with horror at his missing limb.

    Another spell rocketed from Harry's wand, a gray streak of magic that spiraled towards Draco's face. The Ocular Reducto curse struck Draco directly on his eyes, having branched into two prongs during its flight. The twin orbs, as gray as the color of the spell, shrunk in upon themselves, before exploding outwards, showering the floor with flesh and blood. A howl sounded from Draco's throat, detailing his agony, and his empty eye sockets filled with tears, the excess spilling over.

    Harry's face split into a wide grin at the sound of Draco's suffering, and he decided to supplement that by breaking his legs. Twin jets of electric blue streaked from his slashing wand, striking Draco's kneecaps, and cracking them with a harsh "pow!" that was not unlike the noise Harry remembered from the Westerns that Dudley would watch. The thought of the Dursleys stoked the already roaring fire of rage that was crackling inside him, and, two jabs of his wand later, a black-as-night orb ripped its way through the air towards the pale, sniveling figure ahead of it.

    Instead of instantaneously causing an effect like most spells did, this curse was slowly absorbed into Draco's body, his magic and his essence. It took a full five minutes for this absorption to happen, and, in the meantime, Harry took great delight in slicing off all of Draco's extremities and savagely cauterizing the wounds.

    Harry cackled to himself as he toyed with the pompous Slytherin, for torturing was so much fun. He watched with unmasked glee as the scion of the Malfoy line cryed like a little girl with a skinned knee, albeit with slightly more serious injuries than that. Suddenly, the slight black glow that had been surrounding Draco vanished, and Harry's grin widened, a maniacal chuckle emitting from his throat as he waited with baited breath for the spell to take effect.

    Slowly, Draco's cries turned to sobs, and then to sniffles, before disappearing altogether. He turned his face up at Harry, who laughed all the louder at the sight of Draco without eyeballs. Once again, Draco's face turned from puzzlement, to discomfort, to downright agony, but this Harry wasn't there to save him from the pain. The body of the pointed-faced boy began to puff up, and Harry's anticipation rose higher and higher with each centimeter that Draco's body grew, until both reached the breaking point.

    Through the haze of pain and suffering, it seemed that Draco had noticed that he was being inflated for he began to frantically push down on his body, and exhale as fast and hard as he could, striving to somehow slow the imminent fate. As Draco's body tried to grow even more, Harry began constructing a shield for himself. Just in time too, as Draco's body couldn't handle the strain, and exploded.

    With a whoosh, the figure was ripped apart by an unseen force, and chunks were thrown all across the room, splattering the walls with blood and creating the ambvience of a butcherhouse. Harry, protected by a shield, emerged unscathed and clean from the explosion. He conjured a bucket, and banished all of the flesh, organs and blood into it.

    "Buckbeak likes ferret, right?" After this quote, Harry took one look around him, threw his head back, and laughed, long and loud.

    Thus ended the life of Draco Malfoy, and the line of the Malfoys, yet began a transformation so radical, so inherently evil, in the last of the Potters, that it was not spoken of by any for centuries afterwords...
     
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  4. Xiph0

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    RE: Turn of the Tail

    :D Fue.
    Got another one:

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    -Entry-




    Harry Potter, a modestly built kid, strolled down the halls of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry minding his own business and humming to himself.

    He looked across the courtyard, taking note of the time - he had an hour or two before he got to demolish Slytherin on the pitch; he was practically giddy.

    The team had enlisted the Creevey brothers to be their beaters this year. They had played Hufflepuff in their first match a few weeks ago, and to everybodys surprise, the Creevys had turned out to be quiet the sadistic pair on the pitch.

    Zacharias Smith had to be removed mid-game for a fractured skull, Dennis' work, to his great delight. This match against Slytherin could be nothing short of a bleedin' crack-up.

    His musings were cut short as he spotted something brown and furry up ahead, and upon further examination, identified it as a tail. Shrugging and pocketing it, he figured he'd head out to Hagrid's in a moment and see if he couldn't find out what it had belonged to.

    Once at the cabin, he raised his fist to knock, pulling back when he heard some rat-like snickering from within. Stepping back a pace or two, he crept over to the window and peaked in.

    Standing within was Draco Malfoy, accompanied by Goyle - who was currently pre-occupied writing something on the cabin wall.

    Harry squinted through his glasses, reading "Creatures Not Welcome" painted in deep red, almost illegible handwriting. Bugger if the purebloods didn't need to work on their calligraphy.

    His eyes darted left, and he felt his mind shut off. Draco Malfoy was standing over the massive corpse - one that could easily be mistook as a small paddle boat - of Rebeus Hagrid.

    Harry found himself with a new calmness, to not mention the deep, malignant hatred that had flared up within his skull. Thinking on the spot, he removed the tail from his pocket and cast a few quick Petrification & Statis charms on it, effectively making it into a make-shift club.

    Edging his way over to the door, he turned the handle and inched it open just a bit, hearing the bolt pass the strike plate. Stepping back a couple of feet, he lunged at the door, putting all his momentum behind a kick aimed right below the handle of the door.

    Draco Malfoys head shot up, and Goyle jumped, turning and trying to draw his wand. Harry wasted no time, his wand in one hand and his club in the other, he quickly stunned Draco.

    Draco stunned, Harry turned his attention on Goyle - who was still trying to get his wand out - and closed the distance between them in a second flat, smashing him across the face with the hardened tail.

    "Creatures not welcome, eh?!" Another smack. Then a second, third, fourth.

    His robes now thoroughly coated with blood, Harry stood up, walking over to Malfoy and picking the disgrace to the species up by his robe collar. Dragging the rigid, stunned form over to Hagrid's bed, he quickly positioned the ponce's neck upon the frame.

    Using his wand to levitate Hagrid, he placed him sitting on Malfoys legs, effectively holding him in place - his neck resting on the thin, wooden frame of the bed.

    With an elated grin, Harry enerviated the Malfoy scion.

    Grinning positively sadistically, Harry ground out, "Morning, Malfoy." Before raising the tail above his head, and bringing it down as hard as he could on the kid's skull.

    He watched in fascination as the head bounced down with the force of his blow, but bounced back up in return. Getting an idea, he started timing his blows.

    CRACK The head bounced down, before bobbing back up - CRACK, this went on for a minute or two, before Harry found his bloodlust fully sated.

    Levitating Hagrid - now splattered in blood - and a howling Fang out of the cabin window and onto the grass out front, he turned his wand upon Malfoy and Goyle, shooting out two quick Incendio's before beating a somewhat quick retreat.

    Making himself comfortable on a tree stump, Harry relaxed and watched the cabin engluf itself in flames, Fang's baying providing a chilling, yet oddly cheerful setting.
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    I've got to say, that was damned fun to write. :D
     
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    Bleach Beat the Bitch

    Narcissia sniffed in disdain as she stared down at the recently added grave to the Malfoy lineage graveyard. When she had first et Lucius Malfoy, she had her doubts to whether his hair was naturally blonde, her doubts were put to side at the first sexual encounter they shared; Lucius's body hair was also platinum blond.

    But once her son had been born they were reignited and affirmed.

    Lucius Malfoy was a natural Red head.

    His son was also a natural red head.

    Like his father before him, Draco used chemical's to bleach his hair of the pigment, and had continued to do so for the rest of his life. Recently however, the chemicals proved to be too much for him, and had recently caught up with him.

    Before her laid his grave, and the tombstone which marked the grave plot. She sniffed once again as she turned away from the remains of her son. Her eyes were watery, and had shed more then a few tears. Not because her son had died, no.

    But because of what was inscribed upon the stone.

    "The Blond Ponce was a natural red-head burrrrrn"~ B.Z

    A sigh escaped her lips as she made a mental note to speak with the young Blaise Zambini and the career he had chosen to take on in life. She had to admit, It was a genius idea, making money off peoples death. It had been largely successful due to Harry Potter going insane and slaughtering most of the wizarding population after they told him he couldn't conjure a dancing spoon.

    ---

    I got bored.
     
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    He killed people with a dancing spoon? That's almost as bad as my idea of killing Volde off with a rock in a sock.
     
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    “Thanks for the meal, Dobby.”

    “Dobby is glad to be of service, Harry Potter, sir!”

    Harry watched with amusement as the excited house-elf tripped over one of the many socks scattered around the room, falling on its face with a thump. Waving, Harry exited the kitchen, coming to a stop out in the darkened hall as the portrait snapped closed behind him, a butterbeer in hand.

    Downing half the bottle in one go, the boy-who-lived strolled casually down the corridor, his black school robes flowing behind him as he kept a steady pace, broken only when he came upon the wide, empty Entrance Hall to the school. A short mental debate ensured, whether he should return to his dormitory or continue his midnight walk. He finally decided on the latter and continued onwards, into the Great Hall.

    Spotting nothing of interest, Harry finished off the last of his drink, tossing the bottle against one of the stone walls before revealing the Marauder’s Map, ignoring the loud sound caused by the shattering of glass. He wasn’t worried about being caught.

    Withdrawing his holly wand with his right hand, he tapped the folded parchment twice, intoning as he seated himself upon the Ravenclaw table, “I solemnly swear that I am up to no good.

    Before his eyes, lines of ink started to appear, crisscrossing the page, taking the shape of rooms and passageways, some hidden and some not. Then names appeared, all above their own dot. Most of them were grouped together in the dorms, but a few were out and wandering. Mostly professors, but he spied the occasional student, again, mostly prefects, all returning to their common rooms for the night. There were a few, however, that weren’t supposed to be out.

    Like Hannah Abbott and Susan Bones, whose dots were strangely over-lapping. It didn’t take Harry long to figure out what was happening. He smirked, arching an eyebrow as his legs dangled from the edge of the table. He was contemplating on whether he should go have a look before he saw a name closing in on their position in the AstronomyTower. It was Professor McGonagall, and she was moving fast, as if she were running. He watched her dot enter the room and stop in the doorway as the other two sprung apart. He could only imagine what was happening up there.

    With a chuckle, his eyes roamed the map. Filch was on the third floor, chasing a student he didn’t know through the old restricted hall from Harry’s first year, where the Philosophers Stone had been kept. Under them, on the second, Fred and George were both stationary inside a toilet cubicle. He vaguely remembered the two brothers talking about a prank involving toilet seats, but forgot the details.

    He was about to deactivate the map when two names caught his attention, leaving the Slytherin common room in the dungeons.

    Tracy Davis.

    And Draco Malfoy.

    Now Harry wasn’t a big fan of the rumor mill, considering he was often involved in the latest gossip, but everyone knew of Malfoy’s new little whore. He had dumped Parkinson on her arse and moved up the ‘food chain’, as it were. Tracy was definitely more attractive than Pansy, and Harry was still wondering what she saw in that rat-faced bastard. He made been toying with the idea of fucking with Malfoy’s mind the following morning with a few well placed insults, but he had a much better idea now.

    It was spell testing time.

    Standing, Harry swiftly exited the Great Hall, making a beeline towards the stairs that led down into the dungeons. Malfoy and his tart were heading deeper into the labyrinth of passageways, making it easier for Harry to predict where they were heading. There were no stairs down that way, making it impossible for them to get passed him.

    It didn’t take long for the two to find a suitable place. Harry quickly memorized the path and deactivated the map, lighting his wand all in the same motion wordlessly. Map away, he quickened his pace, mentally cackling at the opportunity. After Voldemort’s rebirth, Harry had taken it upon himself to get ready, seeing as how the headmaster didn’t seem to be doing anything, bar sanctioning Occlumnecy lesions between Snape and himself, which were an utter failure. Harry had taken to learning the Dark Arts, following the popular saying, “Know thy enemy.”

    Let us say that he got a little... addicted to their power. He wasn’t the same Harry Potter that Voldemort used for his re-birth.

    Approaching the room, he paused outside the doorway, listening in. The unmistakable sound of snogging reached his ears, as well as the rustling of fabric. They hadn’t moved passed kissing yet, which suited his purpose perfectly. Waving his wand, he extinguished his wand-light before casting a detection spell on the door. They hadn’t even locked it the muggle way, let alone with magic.

    Shaking his head at their carelessness, he quickly grabbed the handle, turned it, and flung the door open, rushing into the room. Before the pair could react, a stunner rocketed from Harry’s wand, slamming into the platinum blondes chest, throwing him into the wall like a rag-doll, unconscious.

    Impedimenta!Tracy shrieked, bringing her wand out to chest level. Harry swerved around her spell, hitting the girl with a silencing spell, interrupting her second casting. Before she could recover, he leveled his wand at her head, muttering, “Imperio.

    Her mind was weak, and he was in control in seconds, her hazel eyes glazed. In the back of his mind, he could feel her will completely under his grasp. It was a strange feeling, but not unpleasant. It was like he had two minds, the second only getting information when he deemed so.

    Ignoring the attractive Slytherin for the moment, he turned his attention towards Draco. Summoning an old, disused chair, he levitated the blonde onto it before bounding him tightly with thick conjured rope. Casting a few strengthening charms so the chair didn’t give way, he turned back towards Tracy, who was still staring at him with vacant eyes, wand held loosely at her side.

    “Come to me.” He thought, directing it towards what he had dubbed his second mind. She obeyed without question, moving forward fluidly, stopping mere inches from his body. He shivered in anticipation as he flung his wand towards the door, closing and locking it with a weird squelching sound, before chanting under his breath, waving his magical focus in a practiced movement. With a slight flare of magic, the room was blanketed in a silencing ward, draining a decent portion of his magic.

    “On you’re knees.” He commanded, and once again, she did so without hesitation. Unbuttoning his outer robe, he pushed it aside before unbuttoning his pants, parting the fabric to reveal is red boxers. Smirking, he commanded her through the link to start sucking his cock.

    There was a slight tugging at the back of his mind that took him by surprise as her will suddenly became stronger, and he had to concentrate, wrestling it back under his control. It only took a few seconds, but when he was finally back in control, she didn’t hesitate in reaching out to remove his appendage from his boxers, immediately sticking his limp organ in her warm mouth.

    His eyes closed as she started slowly, using one hand to hold the base firmly while the other played with his balls. It wasn’t long before he was completely hard, her tongue licking, her lips sucking all along his shaft.

    Opening his eyes, he revived the Death Eater spawn with a flick of his wand, smirking as the self-proclaimed ‘Slytherin Prince’ awakened.

    “Wha-Tracy?” He looked up, his eyes widening in disbelief. “Wha-What! POTTER!”

    The smirk never once left his face. “Morning Draco.” He said cheerfully, glancing at his watch. It was half-passed twelve.

    “What’s going – Tracy! Wha – POTTER!” Draco spluttered incoherently. His normally pale face was flushed red in anger as he stared at his girlfriend in shock. “What are you doing!?”

    “What does it look like she’s doing, Draco?” Harry asked, slipping his wand into a pocket before threading his fingers through her raven locks. “She’s giving me a blowjob. Isn’t it great?” After a little mental command, she made few loud slurps and moans, before going back to the task at hand. Harry couldn’t help giving a slight groan at her actions.

    “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER!?” He screamed in rage, struggling against the ropes that tied his body down. “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!? I’LL KILL YOU! I’LL KILL YOU, POTTER!”

    Harry snorted, before laughing mockingly in fake amusement. “You? You will kill me? Come now, Draco. There are dreams, and then there are delusions. So hard to tell apart. Trust me, I know more than anyone.”

    “I’LL KILL YOU! AND THEN THE DARK LORD WI-” The young Malfoy heir never got to finish his sentence, as a loud whip-cracking sound echoed throughout the room. Draco’s head rocked back as he shouted in pain, a long bloody laceration running the length of his left cheek. Harry twirled his wand around in his right hand, eerily similar to that of the Dark Lord. His left was still tangled in Tracy’s hair as she worked him.

    “The Dark Lord will do nothing, you brainwashed little shit. He’d likely kill you for taking away his chance at revenge. He wants me for himself.”

    “FUCK YOU, POT-” Another loud crack sounded, another bloody gash, now appearing on his right shoulder. Harry started at how good it made him feel to cause pain, nearly unloading in the pretty Slytherin before him. “You-You fucking half-blood piece of sh-”

    Crucio!” Harry shuddered as a scream of pure agony was torn from Malfoy’s throat, filling the room at a deafening pitch. He cried and thrashed against his prison, only to cause himself more pain and anguish. Harry couldn’t take it anymore and groaned, pulling his cock out of Tracy’s mouth, pulling himself. He sighed as he covered the girls face in his seed. Harry realized the unforgivable had fallen due to his lack in concentration. Both of them.

    “Where-What’s goi-” The girl asked in confusion before succumbing to a well placed stunner.

    “Now, where was I?” Bending down, he picked up an old quill that fell out of Tracy’s robes, transfiguring it into a sharp fork. Flicking his wand, the fork flew at high-speed towards the blonde, impaling his thigh, before retracting, then impaling it again. Malfoy moaned in pain, having screamed his throat raw under the Cruciatus.

    Twirling his wand in a circular motion, a spray of acid erupted from the tip, coating the right side of Draco’s face. He thrashed, screamed, moaned, as his skin was slowly eaten away, leaving a grossly warped, bloody pulp. Moving on, he muttered something under his breath, a yellow beam of light firing from his wand, hitting his captive in the kneecaps.

    Draco’s eyes bulged in pain, his mouth opening in a silent shriek as he convulsed madly against Harry’s ropes. A sob escaped the boy’s lips as his lower legs began inflating, growing so quickly that only seconds after it started, it finished, the skin tearing, his legs exploding in a mass of fleshy gore, spraying everything remotely close to him in crimson blood.

    Harry cackled insanely as he removed his glasses, using his robe to wipe them clean. Where his legs previously rested, two large bones stained with blood stood, the product of a simple enlargement charm twisted for sinister purposes. Harry was very pleased with the results.

    “Well,” Harry drawled, disappointed that Malfoy had passed out from the pain. “This is getting tiresome. Time to end this.”

    Lethargically, Harry flicked his wand at his one-time rival, a jet of flames spraying forth, engulfing him fully. He shrieked for a full minute before they died down, his charred corpse filling the room with a putrid stench. Sighing, Harry quickly cleaned himself off, putting his cock away and re-buttoning his clothes before removing all his enchantments, the door again making that odd squelch as it unlocked.

    “Come, my dear. I’m not finished with you yet.” A swish and flick had Tracy floating behind him as he exited the room, her face still drenched in his home-brand milk. As he rounded the corner, her limp body still following, he was suddenly hit by the strange urge to pull a tail.

    “I’m losing my mind.” He muttered quietly, but not completely objecting to the idea.

    -x-X-x-

    Kitchenware torture? Check. Fire? Check. Thoughts on tail? Check.

    Tell me what you think!? :)
     
  8. DGD

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    Brilliance, getting head while he Crucio's Draco = priceless.

    =D
     
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    "DOBBY, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE YOU WORTHLESS LITTLE SHIT," Draco screamed upon seeing the free elf. "I is working mas.. dra.. malf... sex toy" Dobby stuttered before finally deciding on his answer. All other thoughts were driven out of Dracos head upon hearing sex toy from the repulsive little creature. "Sex toy, are you.." He never got a chance to finish as he was flying headfirst into the stone wall of the 4th floor corridor.

    When Draco woke up he looked around and saw a padded room. He tried to get up only to realise he was chained to a chair. He frantically looked around and saw his former house elf looking at him with a large toothy grin. Dobby snapped his finger and a large metal rod appeared in his hands. "Wha, what are you gonna do with that" Draco said the fear obvious in his voice, tears streaming down his face.

    "Not what you is thinking" Dobby replied while cocking the metal rod back and smashing it into his mouth three times. He snapped his fingers again and the rod turned into a pair of muggle pliars. "I needed to loosen up you's teeth so I could remove them" He cackled madly and ripped the first tooth out that hadn'y already been smashed out. "After all you's not be giving a very good blow job if you you'se too much teeth would you!"

    After Dobby's statement Draco tried to say something only to have it come out as non-sensical drivel. After Dobby had removed the last of Dracos teeth he began to remove his own clothing, which took 10 minutes accounting to the fact that he had so many layers on. When he finally was naked Draco looked down at the extremely erect 5 inch penis which was disturbingly half head.
    Dobby then pushed Draco's chair to the floor and proceeded to shove his dick into Draco's mouth. Dobby began thrusting hard into Draco's mouth as Draco screamed only adding to Dobby's pleasure. Draco started choking and was about to pass out when Dobby pulled out and unloaded into his face. It was rainbow coloured. Dobby proceeded to rape Draco in the ass for several hours and despite the sitiuation he pondered where the elf got his stamina. He only ever lasted twice Ginny. He supposed it was because he was so much more attractive, even the male population at Hogwarts would attest to that.

    Draco screamed as yet another load was blasted into his ass. He was never allowed any pleasure, Dobby made sure of that. Then Dobby left Draco. Draco thought maybe he was being saved the next night when he heard a sound but screamed out when he saw who it was. Who would of ever thought a House elf wearing twelve hats would be that scary. Dobby picked up where he left off the night before and this process continued for some months. No one had any idea where Draco was so everyone assumed he left to go be a death eater with daddy.

    On the day before the end of Year feast Dobby entered but without the customary food paste and nutrition potion but with a small, rusty melon baller. He wasted no time in removing Draco's left eye and cleaning it out before inserting his penis into Draco's eye socket and pumping away diligently. Draco screamed louder than ever as Dobby's penis found his brain. After about five minutes of Dobby being careful he just let loose and speared his dick in to Draco'a brain over and over again before blowing his stack all over Draco's brain with rainbow hued jizm leaking out his eye socket. The next night at dinner when everyone was in the hall Draco's body appeared above the Gryffindor table. Before pandemonium could erupt a tombstone fell from above landed squarely on Ginny's head, crushing the skull. It read R.I.P. Draconus J. Malfoy, DEATH BY HOUSE ELF SEED TO THE BRAIN, AND A SEVERE CASE OF AIDS FROM FUCKING THE WONDERSLUT.
     
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  10. Darius

    Darius 13/m/box

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    Oops forgot to line break. Guess I could edit it. If it's a problem tell me and I will.
     
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    Edit would be best, it looks like fucking shit atm.
     
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    Darius 13/m/box

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    All better now.
     
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    That was a little.... disturbing, but at least you killed Ginny too, always a plus.
     
  14. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    -o-O-o-​

    Light from the lone torch in the room flickered ominously against the far wall. Shivering from the cold, a figure in a dark corner sat, rocking back and forth, hands clasped around knees. Upon closer inspection, the figure was a man, but he was dressed in rags and had trails of dried blood streaking across his emaciated face. A soft clicking noise was heard outside of the door, and the man in the corner froze. As the noise grew louder, the man began to whimper. It began as just a light keening, but soon swelled to a low, tortured moan that reverberated throughout the prison.

    Suddenly, the clicking noise stopped, and with it halted the moaning. The figure in the corner lay prone on the floor, looking as if he was trying to sink through the frigid, stony ground. Through the shadows, he was able to glimpse a slight turning of the handle on the door, which made him lay all the flatter. Creaking, the door inched open, a beam of light illuminating its path, spreading wider and wider as the gap furthered. A shadow, though, shaped like the head of a man, obstructed the beam as it widened.

    With a click of his fingers, the man in the doorway conjured a glowing ball of light; a blazing beacon of hope in the darkness for the prone figure in the corner. It illuminated the icy green eyes and tousled black hair that were an immediate identifier as to the identity of the figure, who was also dressed in intricate dress robes, suited for those at a dinner party, or at an important social function. However, the sphere was extinguished without delay.

    The man in the doorway cleared his throat, whispering, "Your mother was present, Draco. She looked absolutely ravishing tonight, dressed in all white, oddly enough. It would seem that black would be appropriate for a woman of her position--losing her only son only weeks after losing her doting husband--but, if her bedtime chats are correct, she never really cared for you."

    Nary a response was heard from Draco, the huddled man in the shadows, but that never deterred Harry Potter, who merely smirked. "Why, not even Greengrass, your stunning fiancé, looked to be in mourning. She did make me aware, quite aggressively I might add, that she was missing the presence of a man in her life. So wild was she, that I'm still a little sore to the touch. I'm so sorry that it had to come to this Draco, but I'm afraid that I can't keep you locked away forever."

    For the first time, the blonde-haired figure in the corner reacted to Potter's words, stiffening slightly at the conclusion that he drew from the final sentence. A cracking noise shattered the silence, and a brilliant red-orange whip slapped down on Draco's back, slashing through his skin and sending blood flying through the air.

    A moan escaped his clenched teeth, but nothing else. Harry merely shrugged, and swung his weapon again, eyes dancing with merriment. Once more, the whip cracked down upon Draco's back, spraying the wall red. Again, again and again the whip came down, seducing screams and yells from the prisoner, and drawing laughs and shouts from the torturer, who brought his tool down upon flesh time after time. Finally, when Draco's back was raw, and the adjacent wall was covered with blood, Harry halted, panting a bit from the exertion.

    Silently, the whip retracted into nothingness, slithering back into Harry's wand, taking the reddish sheen that it created with it. Once again, the room was plunged into darkness save for the single flickering torch in the corner. A slight whisper floated across the air, words of power summoning magics and forcing them to perform their will. An amorphous mass of silver appeared in front of Harry, who squinted his eyes, studying it closely. A flick here, a jab there, and a sweeping motion at the end, and Harry Potter was sated.

    The formerly shapeless specter was transformed into a pair of knives, intricately constructed and flawlessly conjured. Stowing his wand in the numerous folds of his robes, Harry Potter grasped his two utensils of pain, and stepped towards Malfoy, who lay, gasping for air, on the floor. Lovingly, Harry stroked his knives, with an almost tender look on his face. It was without warning, then, that he struck out with his right hand, slicing a chunk of his rival's cheek off in one deft swing.

    Screams punctured the silence, who fled once again in search of a better place to rest. Without mercy, Harry struck again, gouging Draco through the eyeball with the point of his knife. Jerking the knife back towards him, Harry managed to tear the milky orb from its socket, severing all ties of it to the body in formerly inhabited. Laughing, Harry sliced and diced his way through Draco's face, carving an elaborate pattern across his aristocratic features.

    Ribbons of flesh dangled from the pale face of the former Lord Malfoy, who, exhausted from the screaming, lay on the ground, striving not to breath so as not to irritate his bleeding throat. Harry gazed upon this sight, amused, and banished his weapons, instead redrawing his wand. A wild expression in his eye, Harry slashed his wand, and with a crack, a substantial gash sliced its way down Draco's stomach. Hoarse, Draco's screams didn't quite have the same effect on Harry that they previously had, which made him frown slightly. Another slash, another crack, another gash, and another dissatisfying scream.

    Again, again and again Harry slashed his wand, slicing Draco's innards to the point of which that the only organs remaining in his body were his heart, brain and left lung. Blood was seeping out of the stomach cavity, flooding the floor with its vibrant red hue and creating its metallic stench, pervading throughout the room. Wrinkling his nose at the smell, Harry looked down at Draco, who lay, broken and defeated, and his face contorted into a hateful look. He brought his boot up, careful to remain over Draco's head, and paused slightly at the top, gazing into his rival's one eye. What he saw terribly surprised him.

    Instead of the loathing and disgust he expected to be present in Draco's eyes, he perceived glimpses of hope, glimpsed shards of retribution, and even spotted a flicker of admiration. In a moment, though, that was crushed, as Harry brought down all of his body weight upon the head, shattering the skull and splattering brain matter around the floor. A rapid clicking noise was heard, closing in on his room, and, for the first time, an expression other than jubilance or fury flashed across his face.

    With an elaborate wave of his wand, the blood, brain matter and carcass were vanished, the oppressive smell was alleviated and the door was flung open. As he strode outwards, a dark-haired goddess rounded the corner, her ornate dress bunched up around her thighs. At the sight of him, she slowed to a halt, breathing heavily and leant against the wall. Harry glided over to her, a bewildered look on his face.

    "I...I...I h-heard a screaming...a-a-and I came to see wh-wh-what was the matter."

    Harry sighed. "Oh, it was just a rodent. Now, you fell asleep on me, Missy. Am I going to have to punish you?"

    The gorgeous brunette giggled through her heavy breathing. "Well, Cissy fell asleep way before I did, so I think that we should punish her, together!"

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    Meh.

    Feedback? For either this one or the previous one?
     
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    Lol, loved the first one, dies as a Ginny Pig (purposeful spelling)
    And I would like feedback for mine too, be as brutal as you want, just like to know what people thought.
     
  16. Kiklo

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    It was sick. Never imagined Dobby in that sort of behavior. But if that was what you were aiming for...sick and disturbing, then congrats.
     
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    Darius 13/m/box

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    Lol, maybe I should of put it in the anti cliche thread. I was going for different and may have gotten just a tiny bit enthusiastic.
     
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    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Oooo, this will be fun. :D I'll have to think about this before I write my entry...
     
  19. The Hungry Basilisk

    The Hungry Basilisk Raptured to Hell

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    Eww Christ! I have to admit I don't think Draco deserves to die horribly!
    He is just a product of another's evil intentions.
    We should all pity him and back away slowly in the direction of the nearest pub..
     
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    Then why, for fucks sake, did you even click this thread?
     
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