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Quality Naruto fics

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Inert, Feb 17, 2012.

  1. Pure Infinity

    Pure Infinity High Inquisitor

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    Uzumaki by AlmostElectric is pretty decent. It's not perfect - has some fluff here and there, and a few bits are just canon rehash - but there are some interesting twists on the main story aside from Sasuke being female.
     
  2. Ferdiad

    Ferdiad Unspeakable

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    Expendable Heroes
    Summary:Sasuke Uchiha could never quite understand how a boy two years his junior somehow managed to get into the academy and remain there despite dead-last status. Suffice to say, he's in for quite a shock when said little boy hands him his ass. And that, as they say, is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.

    Link:https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8916095/1/Expendable-Heroes
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    This is a pretty good story set in a AU verse where Naruto is about 2 years younger than in Canon, this along with certain events such as the Uchiha massacre never happening means Sasuke isn't a total prick. He's actually very charismatic. The story is pretty much a focus on the friendship he forms with a pretty fucked up Naruo.
     
  3. Hero of Stupidity

    Hero of Stupidity Villain of Sensibility ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    What do you mean about pretty fucked up Naruto? I once read an ff where Naruto was taken into the forest and repeatedly raped by Sakura's mother. So on a scale from 1 to that how fucked up?
     
  4. Ferdiad

    Ferdiad Unspeakable

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    More of a Root kind of fucked up. Not as bad as Sai but still pretty wonky.
     
  5. Owimbowé

    Owimbowé Fourth Year

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    Whaaaat ?

    Can you provide a link ?:sherlock:
     
  6. Hero of Stupidity

    Hero of Stupidity Villain of Sensibility ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    It was a long time and many mindbleaches ago, so sorry no dice.
     
  7. Ayreon

    Ayreon Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    Not sure if it's the right one, but he could be talking about this fucked up Naruto/Mebuki Haruno fic:

     
  8. Brukel

    Brukel Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    Nah it sounds like this one:

    Naruto: One Man Team

    from what I remember it's bashing galore, but Sakura's mum (who rapes Naruto to get a bloodline) and Sasuke get it the worst. Also everyone and their mother wants to sleep with Naruto.
     
  9. Darth Disaster

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    What's the point of making him even younger? Instantly kills any desire to read the story.

    Wait wait wait. Full stop.

    Do Not Want.

    I petition to strip from this fic the tag 'quality' and reclassify to 'craptacular.'

    Naruto as Sasuke (The Fucked Up One) and Sasuke as Naruto (The Charismatic One) sounds absolutely horrible.
     
  10. Vincent

    Vincent Death Eater

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    From what I've read of it Sasuke has a normal childhood while Naruto's been partially weaponized due to some Root screw up.
     
  11. Baradine

    Baradine Seventh Year

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    I'll put in my recommendation for that story as well. Not only am I pretty certain it's been rec'd previously, for most of what I read comes from DLP, but I have been reading it since about chapter four.

    It is an excellent story. I'm not sure what those other guys are talking about, with Sasuke being charismatic. He's simply not screwed in the head, for reasons that become obvious later.

    Naruto, on the other hand, is less like a copy of Sasuke given a Naruto reskin, and more like a very reticent person. He doesn't seem broody, or anything. He is also, this being a personal favorite of mine, stronger than Sasuke, but not powerful beyond reason. He's definitely what you would call, a high level genin. Perhaps even on the level of a chunin, at least in combat ability.

    Now, while Naruto being strong is all well and good, this story's true ability to shine is in the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke. Naruto has some issues with restraint, when it comes to his training, and almost never speaks. Watching Sasuke becoming friends with Naruto, regardless of circumstance, is heartwarming. It lacks the qualities that would make one call it a "bro-mance", but the friendship aspect of this story is very well done, nonetheless.

    Lastly, the author is a very good writer. He makes few grammatical and spelling mistakes, has good pacing and a very nice style. I wouldn't be against someone placing this story up for review in the library.

    All in all, abandon your prejudices and check it out. It's great.
     
  12. Gengar

    Gengar Degenerate Shrimp –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Some people just abhor the idea of an OOC likable Sasuke.

    I can sympathise, I'm the same with Snape and Draco.
     
  13. Krieger

    Krieger Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    I checked it out, it was enjoyable, if average, up until the alternate version of team 7 (the canon version I take it?), entered their world, then that starting the comparison of the two seperate teams and the fapping over the authors version starts. Tried skipping one chapter hoping they were gone, nope. Two chapters, three... four? Nope, the shitness continues.

    Way to make me lose interest in an otherwise decent fic. Id recommend the first half for an enjoyable average read, but try not to cross out like I did for the second half with the arrival of the second team seven. Who knows it might of gotten better, maybe you can stomach it, I however didn't make it that far.
     
  14. Ferdiad

    Ferdiad Unspeakable

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    That part read more like a sidestory kind of thing. I usually don't mind those even if they're inherently masturbatory.
     
  15. Sn0rkack

    Sn0rkack Professor

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    Time-traveling redeemed-Sasuke. I need it!
     
  16. Rache

    Rache Headmaster

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    And I want an update for Naruto of the Salamander.
     
  17. Satan

    Satan Third Year

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    This story is fucking awful.
     
  18. Sn0rkack

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    [Discontinues thread]
     
  19. Krieger

    Krieger Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    ... to write? :)
     
  20. Satan

    Satan Third Year

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