For someone important's sake no more houselves. Those things are creepy enough without other images.

 

This is one of my favoroite Evil!Harry story by far.

Really, the only thing it needs is a couple of orgies, a hint of S&M and a sweet blood massacre to top it off. Anyways, if you need an idea for chapter 6, I got an idea. Do you want me to post here or message it to you Yarrgh!

Anyways Au Revoir

 

Great story. The way you right it is awesome. I have onme problem though. WHat the fuck happened to Harry and BElla in the end of the last chapter? Did I miss something?

 

Its part of the plot...its a ruse by Harry. He needs Bellatrix around...well he wants her around, so he has to make an excuse. Plus, he can't jsut show up looking fine, he ahs to look like he got tortured, etc by Voldemort.

It should become clear with the next chapter.

 

Ok thanks for clearing that up.

 

My favorite way for Ginny to die is for Harry to somehow force Molly to kill her. It gets Ginny dead, and it's probably the worst thing he could do to Molly.

Anyway, the story is coming along great. It has really grown from your original Violent/Pornography intent. Bravo.

 

Dang this is got to be one of my favorite stories that was awsome I hope it updates soon I really want to know whay happens next.

O and kill ginny fast she annoys me to no end.

 

One of the things I liked about this story was the author's willingness to stretch a few boundaries. A real disappointment for me, however, was the way the Revel was glossed over. It seemed like a perfect oppurtunity for Harry to vent some excess energy in a rather interesting way...

Anyhoo, it's a good fic, but not anywhere near the top of my list right now.

 

Haha, I have said before, and I will say again...I LOVE THIS FIC! literally to the point of deranged fangirlishness!

Especially the hot lesbian incest scenes ...carry on writing this, and also Chimera as I love both of them and I will be happy forever!

 

This is an excellent fic, I loved the idea of Tonks as a spy, the whole thing was just great, and the scene with the two muggles and how the young one has declared Harry her master of her own will is just great. Can't wait for more.

 

First, an update...I have about 6000 words of the next chapter done, but the problem is finding time to actually sit down and write. I can't write in 20 minute bursts, I need a good three hours of time to just sit and whale away at the keyboard to get things done. So I'm gonna keep trying to spare time and do it.

I know the Revel was a great opportunity for Harry to vent whatever, but i let it go because essentially the whole fic is going to be about Harry doing whatever he wants. This isn't a typical fic, Harry won't be contrained by the demands of society. He'll fuck what he likes, kill what he likes and essentially make others conform to him.

 

Oooh, I can't wait to see what the Order has to say... and will Fleur be "converted"?

 

Great Story. Needs to be updated soon.

 

BUMP! Updated about half an hour ago.

Could you tell me your thoughts/opinions?

 

No. My thoughts are X-rated and therefore not to be viewed by anyone over the age of 16.

As I recall... I said this:

And lo' and behold, I was right on the money. I must be a Seer.

Anyway, another fantastic chapter.

Tonks repeatedly owning Ginny? Flipping off Momma Weasley? What's with all the Weasley hate? It's not like the freckles are contagious... not like Ginny's multitude of STDs. Unless... the freckles are tiny STDs... either way, it's not important. And Ginny is so manly, I loved that; fuckin' hilarious.

And Fleur gets semi-raped. Merrill needs to come in here and post that picture; I'm too lazy. But then, she gives in, and well... "bow bow chicka wow". Mm-hmm... chalk another one up for the harem.

And epic was the way you killed off Ginny. Hooray to you. Here's to another chapter of win. Now hurry up with Chimera.

 

w00t! New chapter!

As i said in my review on ficwad, if it were me, I'd focus on a bit more plot development - I have no idea where you're going witht his (apart from the obvious 'rule the world' type thing), but I think now with his Super!Harem, you should take some time out to achieve more goals..

With liberal smut though...

 

wowo wi wa. that was cool as hell. ginny got sylvester stalloned just the way i like it. the smut was awsome and i like the way that unlike most stories, harry has no setbacks. he just owns the entire time and gets a bunch of chicks. great update

 

OMFG...that chapter was just so full of win.

It would take a thousand words just to express what I think of you.




Anyways...I saw no major error other than feeling that the part with Bellatrix at the end was slightly rushed, and that Dumbledore's character should be expanded. I saw a single mechanics error somewhere, but it wasn't anything serious.

And Ginny....she got:




It was so delightful.

I'm eagerly awaiting more win.

 

Fantastic chapter killing ginny, Tonks verbal smackdown of the Weasleys, and adding Fleur to the harem. can't wait for the next update

 

Great chapter.