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Pet Peeves v.10

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Dark Syaoran, Aug 13, 2015.

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  1. Hero of Stupidity

    Hero of Stupidity Villain of Sensibility ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    So that's what we are doing today, arguing?
     
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    It's because it sucks.

    Though, of course, it's a subjective opinion. But of the top of my head: it drags on for far too long and tries to be both a story and a lecture, failing at both. First few chapters have some really great comedy, but it quickly goes downhill. If you have time, you can dig through the library thread. Search it for Taure's posts, he wrote a very on-point review.
     
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  3. _GitGud_

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    Will do, thank you :). It was like the third fanfiction I ever read, so without anything to compare it to I thought it was pretty decent.. at the time.
     
  4. Ghosthree3

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    For me it was the story not being enjoyable to read. I dropped it out of disinterest years ago and didn't find out about the rest of the issues until much later.
     
  5. Ashton Knight

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    It's a combination of things that lesswrong does that rubs people the wrong way. For one, he'd only read 3 of the books when he first started it and has only recently finished reading the series (Not quite sure of this though). Another is his rejection of anything resembling constructive criticism and slander of DLP. There's also the fact that he solved problems that didn't exist in the first place (Rules of Transfiguration).

    But back to the topic at hand.

    A particularly annoying pet peeve of mine is whenever Harry make a comment along the lines of "The Wizard world are biggots/prejudiced/like to stereotype". The fact that the writer can't see the hypocrisy in that statement boggles my mind.
     
  6. _GitGud_

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    Maybe the author used it as a tool to show us Harry's lack of self awareness. is it possible for an author to use intentional hypocrisy without people assuming him/her to be an idiot? If we don't know the author, shouldn't we give him the benefit of the doubt?
     
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    Maybe, but still. The inherent stupidity of the statement that someone had to sit down and write, "Well, they're all just bigots," without even pausing to consider people like Arthur Weasely or Albus Dumbledore cannot be fathomed. They're clearly using Harry as a mouthpiece for their own views. Also expect Weasely or Dumbledore bashing to follow, likely for plotting to steal his gold and landed inheritance.
     
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    Only a sith deals in absolutes.
     
  9. _GitGud_

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    You dirty sith!
     
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    This is a new one on me.

    Crumple-Horned Snorkacks and Other Imaginary Creatures by absolutelywrite

    Tags: Luna Lovegood/Ginny Weasley | background Harry Potter/Ginny Weasley | Luna/Ginny QPR | Luna Lovegood & Ginny Weasley| Asexual Character | Aromantic | aro ace Luna | aro pansexual Ginny | Non-sexual Asexuality | Polyamory (if you can call it polyamory when no one is actually in a romantic relationship) | explicitly mentioned aro and ace characters | Queerplatonic Relationships

    Summary: Unlike the Crumple-Horned Snorkack, asexual and aromantic wizards and witches are very real.

    (The evolution of a relationship, told in five acts)

    <<<>>>

    Okay, I'm all for working out the sexual fantasies as enabled by magic, even exploring alternative relationships where none existed, but this QPR business...

    A non-exclusive Queer Platonic Relationship... isn't that... basically... FRIENDSHIP?
     
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  11. BTT

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    What also puzzles me are the tags "Non-sexual Asexuality" (which seems like a tautology) and "aromantic" in a shipping fic, when the only way I can parse that word is "doesn't fall in love".
     
  12. _GitGud_

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    http://cdn.makeagif.com/media/8-24-2015/qjcsmE.gif
    that sounds like mansplaining to me :D.
     
  13. S1234567890m

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    Maybe 'fixing' asexuals is common in Ao3 and that tag is to be a reassurance that its not going happen?
     
  14. Zel

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    Fascinating, so many kinds of sexuality I didn't know existed.
     
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    So many kinds of sexuality that you probably never even need to know or wanted to know.
     
  16. Zel

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    Well, there isn't useless knowledge...

    Unfortunately, I'm not coming up with any for that stuff but someone smarter might.

    Might.
     
  17. _GitGud_

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    In that case, enjoy the special snowflake parade that is tumblr
    http://safespacenetwork.tumblr.com/define
    and don't forget, anything is a gender if you are just special enough, even mayonnaise :). http://i.imgur.com/GR11Bev.jpg
     
  18. Zel

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    My brain stopped working after the third definition, but the mayonnaise thing is priceless. Eating it without permission would be rape I guess.

    God, that was horrible.
     
  19. _GitGud_

    _GitGud_ Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    Tss,tss,tss, stupid male, you don't have to eat mayonnaise to rape. Have you never heard of stare-rape you shitlord?
    https://kathvonstrike.files.wordpress.com/2014/08/aqfjwqa.jpg
    Tumblr is just the best thing :D.
     
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  20. Zel

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    ...I might know several serial stare-rapists.

    Gotta find if I could be framed as accomplice.
     
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