Whats the betting that the OP is actually a member here, who didn't want folk to know that he/she surfs SIYE? Im just about to read it, will edit to give an opinion. EDIT: Ok, gave up part way through chap one. The author makes an attempt to write decently, but its only an attempt. THe H/G is glaringly obvious from chapter 1, and quite frankly, what put me off was Ginny getting Harry persuaded to teach them all his cool japanese martial arts, right after the old cliche of "the half blood...
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