ill grudingly admit that it isnt bad... well.. not as bad as that HP/BZ you said was GREAT!... it could be executed better, but so could every other story out there...harry is only just slightly OoC and dumbledore comes off as simply manipulative rather than manipulative evil fuckhead cocksucker and what not... the part that irked me the most was draco... he was... too much like the pussy in Half baked plot... overall id say its good enough for a passing glance, but nothing id realy go...
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