Well, I know this fic isn't getting much love here at DLP, but I quite like it. There are grammar errors, of course, but what do you expect when an author is putting out 20k+ word chapters with no Beta? I'm not sure why the chapters are so very lengthy myself, but I enjoyed reading it through to the end. Cliches abound, but they're handled in a sufficiently original way to make it distinct from other fics. I love the fight scenes as well. I would rate it 4/5.
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