I noticed straight away at work whilst mending shoes that this violates potter law! Theres no harry potter in the story at all, ergo not a harry potter fanfiction. Therefore not really relevant to dark lord potter. I was preparing to just exit it right away as the story started talking about Voldemorts daughter at the start. (totally not interested in some 12 year old girl writing a story about being adopted by voldemort who is secretly really nice, handsome and caring) I dont want nice...
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