you're assuming that the Library is meant to showcase every good fic. You assume incorrectly. The Potter Law thread, while not perfect, is a fairly good barometer for what's going to fly here. This rec fails several of them, including Number 1: In this context: Don't rec a story about Hermione reading to her kid. Hermione-Sue = FAIL. Basically all of Chapter 2 fails. Hope this helps.
I've read enough fanfiction that I can if I'm going to enjoy a story after two paragraphs. Two chapters is MORE than enough. You do realize that this is DARK LORD POTTER, right?
So I could be fair, I read the first two chapters. This story, while technically superb, reads like somebody took the whiniest post-DH posts from an H/Hr shipper thread and used them as the basis for a story. While this might seem revolutionary to somebody who's relatively new to HP fanfiction, this brings back memories of two years of H/Hr fans having tantrums and threadshitting after HBP. On to the story: So the premise here is that needing funds, Hermione (of course it had to be...
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