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Abandoned The Father by black-phoenix-warrior - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Ragon, Jul 22, 2006.

2.4000000953674/5, 10 votes
  1. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Jul 22, 2006 #1
    Title: The Father
    Author: black-phoenix-warrior
    Rating:M
    Genre: General with some romance
    Pairing: H/Hr
    Chapters: 26
    Words: 196,022
    Updated: May 28, 2008
    Published: Feb 26, 2004
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: Harry learns the truth about his heritage and not in the way he imagined. Good Snape,Draco, and Narcissa, and grandfatherly Dumbledore. BAD RON YAY!!

    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1749622/1/The-Father

    I know its H/Hr but u might like it. Harry and the Red Haired Rabbits dont get along.
    If its been posted before please delete this thread.


    Checked by Minion, October 25, 2015
    Corrected the link - right before moving it into the trash bin.
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Oct 25, 2015
  2. Brooklynight

    Brooklynight Seventh Year

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    Jul 22, 2006 #2
    I read this fic a long time ago when I was really into Harry/Hermione. I enjoyed the begining but I lost interest towards the latter parts. Its decently written with Dumbledore as a father figure. The author dose however seem to fall for the trap of making everything to easy for Harry and these fics are honestly boring to read. I remember reading as far the the point were Hermione finds Salazar Slytherine's diaries and just decided that enough was enough and moved onto other fics.

    Not great but readable, 3/5
     
  3. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Jul 22, 2006 #3
    STRIKE ONE!

    STRIKE TWO!

    STRIKE THREE, YOU'RE OUT!

    This story does have some original parts, but it was not written well enough and was a little too clichéd for my tastes.

    2.5/5 for the first chapter.
     
  4. Myst

    Myst Headmaster

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    Jul 22, 2006 #4
    Hey Fuego, the story is 2 years old. At the time, It was not majorly cliched.

    I enjoyed it when I read it back then, but I probably wouldnt like it now.
     
  5. KANE

    KANE Groundskeeper

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    Jul 22, 2006 #5
    A read it a while ago, but didn't like it. I can't actually remember why i didn't like it though, so I won't put it down anyway. I doubt i'll try reading it again unless i get bored.
     
  6. matthiasblack

    matthiasblack Squib

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    Jul 25, 2006 #6
    I refuse to read a fic that shows Draco in a good light. He is a colossal prick to me and will always remain one. But other than that i thought it was, well old. Not sure most will like it now though.
     
  7. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    Jul 25, 2006 #7
    I remember this fic. Damn this old. Harry is the Heir to Gryffindor,he gets Godric's room or something like that. I forgot some of it. It was good when I was a H/hr fan. 3/5.
     
  8. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    Jul 25, 2006 #8
    By the summry alone, I do not even want to touch this fic.
     
  9. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Jul 25, 2006 #9
    Yes I must agree this fic has nearly been turned to stone. The author takes months to update. Not just 1 or 2 but like 5 or 7