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Window to the Soul by LooneyLoopeyLupin - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Zevrillion, Jul 28, 2005.

1/5, 5 votes
  1. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Jul 28, 2005 #1
    Title: Window to the Soul
    Author: LooneyLoopeyLupin
    Rating: T
    Category: Angst/Action/Adventure
    Summery: When Harry is only six years old something happens to him that gives his aunt and uncle the perfect excuse to get rid of him. Nine years later he is found by someone in the wizarding world. He doesn't trust and he doesn't speak. Can he?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2473181/1/

    A rather interesting story with its own little twist. Maybe not the best but better than average.
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Jul 29, 2005 #2
    When the person finds him, does he know of the wizarding world? It wouldnt be good if he didnt. Then he would have to learn all about it and it would take forever.
     
  3. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Jul 29, 2005 #3
    He knows all about the wizarding world and will go directly to year 7.
     
  4. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Aug 11, 2005 #4
    The last chapter(/s) makes it a wee bit random.
     
  5. The Jabberwock

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    Jun 4, 2006 #5
    I don't get the ending--- not at all. The story was pretty random in a lot of parts...
     
  6. Shuujaku

    Shuujaku Fourth Year

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    Jun 4, 2006 #6
    Everything started out well enough, but everything after Voldemort being outed as Harry's godfather must have been written while the author was ingesting a healthy helping of magical mushrooms.

    That'll show me for getting my hopes up about an AU that doesn't follow canon.
     
  7. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Jun 4, 2006 #7
    I kept up with it for a while, checking every update, but I jsut eventually lost interest, it just kinda petered out into pointlessness. The start is good if I remember correctly though.
     
  8. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    Aug 16, 2009 #8
    Jesus, this fic gave me a headache. Take a look at this first paragraph:

    It gets worse, but I won't subject you to such torture. This story features a super!Harry who was raised in a forest by a coalition of dark creatures. When he's finally discovered at the age of 16, he speaks only parseltongue (at first), has a six-compartment magical trunk, and has authored books on the dark arts in parseltongue.

    I skipped to the end, and the sheer amount of fail in this fic is astonishing. It's got the worst evil!Dumbledore I've ever encountered, and it turns out that Harry is descended from Slytherin through his mother and Riddle is his godfather.

    1/5, but only because zero isn't an option
     
  9. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Oct 22, 2009 #9
    ^
    He said it.

    1/5