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WIP A Place For Warriors by Owlsaway - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by MrINBN, Apr 22, 2011.

1.71429002285/5, 7 votes
  1. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    Apr 22, 2011 #1
    Title: A Place For Warriors
    Author: Owlsaway
    Rating: T
    Genre: Drama
    DLP Category: General
    Pairing: None
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Dumbledore locks Harry and Snape in the Room of Requirement. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? No slash.
    Link: FFN

    An interesting drama wherein Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirements and essentially told to get over themselves. It... doesn't quite work. It's neither slash nor Severitus, and well over epic length, so if it's your cup of tea, it'll keep you entertained for a while.

    I'm enjoying it immensely thus far, and I give it 5/5.

    Edit: Fixed the link. D'oh!
     
    Last edited: Apr 22, 2011
  2. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Apr 22, 2011 #2
    Change link to chapter 1, not 22. Will read in the morning, lol.
     
  3. Provis

    Provis Second Year

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    Apr 22, 2011 #3
    I read the first four chapters before this story became completely unbearable. Harry has less backbone in this fic than the average invertebrate. There is also absolutely no plot advancement or character development in the opening chapters, only pointless whinging.

    1/5 for the plot and premise, +1 for the spelling and grammar for a 2/5.
     
  4. ninjacom

    ninjacom First Year

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    Apr 22, 2011 #4
    I had to stop reading after the third chapter because of the massive OOC-ness of both Snape and Harry. Harry just broke down sobbing/gasping because Snape said some mean things about him. Harry is such a pussy in this story and the only times he threatens Snape is when he says "I'll use the Room to hurt you!" in the most pathetic way possible before backing down.

    Another nitpicking thing that bothers me is that they use the Room of Requirement to make food. Didn't they say specifically in DH that they couldn't do just that?

    1/5
     
  5. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Apr 22, 2011 #5
    Oh wow, I remember this story from ages ago.

    Unfortunately.
     
  6. Rahedion

    Rahedion Banned

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    Apr 22, 2011 #6
    TERRIBLE. The idea has merit though, and might be the only way I could ever see these two getting along. >.>

    Maybe someone can do it better.

    1/5. Hell, .3/5.