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Oneshot The Eye for an Eye by Nauro - T

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Photon, Jul 1, 2013.

4.1818180084229/5, 22 votes
  1. Photon

    Photon Order Member

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    Jul 1, 2013 #1
    Title: The Eye for an Eye
    Author: Nauro
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure
    Status: Oneshot
    Library Category: General
    Pairings: no romance of any type
    Summary: "During the War, Alastor Moody had lost many things, yet, he always returned the favor twice. Mad-Eye Moody looses something important, and gains something truly vital. A closer look at the realities of the clashes between the Order and the Death Eaters."
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9093619/1/The-Eye-for-an-Eye
    WbA thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=23458 (rated 4.5)
     
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  2. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐

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    Jul 2, 2013 #2
    You posted this in the wrong section.
     
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  3. Photon

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    Jul 2, 2013 #3
    So what is the correct section? AFAIK Library > Review Board is a place to post stories suggested for library ("Place all new fics here for review by our members. Fics will be moved out after a reasonable number of positive reviews.").
     
  4. Oz

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    Jul 2, 2013 #4
    EDIT: Derp.
     
  5. Klackerz

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    Jul 2, 2013 #5
    This is pretty awesome. Managed to capture the character's personality quite well. 4/5
     
  6. Nauro

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    Jul 2, 2013 #6
    It's still your fault I wrote that in the first place.
     
  7. esran

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    Jul 3, 2013 #7
    Great characterization of Moody and great fight scene. Seems a little too short. 4/5.
     
  8. Shouldabeenadog

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    Jul 3, 2013 #8
    I'd really want it to be longer before it went into the library, but it still deserves 3.5/5 round up to 4/5. It just isn't long enough, or have enough depth to really get our teeth into it. But still fun.
     
  9. KrzaQ

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  10. Photon

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    Jul 3, 2013 #10
    This is inside "Stories for other fandoms that aren't Harry Potter. Contains its very own Review Board within.". I am pretty sure that story about Dumbledore, Alastor Moody etc qualifies as Harry Potter fanfiction.
     
  11. Ched

    Ched Da Trek Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐⭐

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    Jul 3, 2013 #11
    Yeah, I'm at a loss as to why people are saying this is in the wrong section.

    Anyone care to enlighten me? At first I assumed it had been moved after the first person mentioned it, but now it's come up again.
     
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  12. Alexx

    Alexx Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Wow, I really really enjoyed that. One of the few non Harry-Centrics that I enjoyed. The best potrayal of Moody i've seen in a while.
     
  13. Ched

    Ched Da Trek Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐⭐

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    According to IRC folks were saying it was in the wrong section because the OP originally posted it with a Naruto summary.

    Next time just own up to stuff like that Bulwersator (assuming it's accurate).

    Anyway, story is 4.5/5 from me. Rounding down.
     
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  14. Photon

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    I am certain that all my edits attempted to add "by Nauro" to the title. I think that people read author ("Nauro") as category ("Naruto").

    And even assuming that I remember wrong (unlikely, my contact with Naruto and its fandom is limited to single accidental and failed attempt at reading story) than only first complaint may be OK as last edit was at "01-07-2013 at 06:18".

    At least it is progress, last time people had some ridiculous theories about alternative accounts.
     
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  15. Klackerz

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    Jul 3, 2013 #15
    Doesn't matter, Was Awesome

    I need more faults which results in things like this.
     
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  16. KrzaQ

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    Jul 3, 2013 #16
    That's what I did. My mistake. Sorry.
     
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