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Oneshot This Stone at My Back by Lomonaeeren - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Stan, Dec 20, 2015.

3.125/5, 16 votes
  1. Stan

    Stan Order Member

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    Dec 20, 2015 #1
    Title: This Stone at My Back
    Author: Lomonaeeren
    Rating: M
    Status: oneshot
    Words: 3,834
    Published: December 3, 2015
    Library Category: Romance
    Pairing: Luna/Ginny
    Link: Link
    Summary: A tour around Ginny and Luna's shared home, built amid the roots of both rock and tree.

    A short, rather sweet romance involving Luna and Ginny. A bit of smut as well. It is also one of the very few fics I've read that manage to do Luna's PoV convincingly, so points for that.
     
  2. Anya

    Anya Harley Quinn DLP Supporter

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    Dec 21, 2015 #2
    This is cute and fluffy and makes me ship Luna/Ginny. 4/5
     
  3. Nuit

    Nuit Dark Lord

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    Dec 24, 2015 #3
    ...that requires a warning?

    It's not terrible but it also wasn't very entertaining for me. 3/5
     
  4. KingRoger

    KingRoger Second Year

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    Dec 26, 2015 #4
    It's fine, not badly written and not anything special. It's doesn't really go anywhere, but it wasn't really meant to either. 3/5
     
  5. Verfassergeist

    Verfassergeist Squib

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    Dec 26, 2015 #5
    Likewise. It was good, but not amazing. Detail was decent, but was nothing to write home about. 3/5
     
  6. sarakitty

    sarakitty Squib

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    Dec 26, 2015 #6
    I thought it was decent. The first Luna/Ginny I've read, so certainly something new (for me). I'd go with 3/5.
     
  7. mickiboy5

    mickiboy5 Squib

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    Dec 27, 2015 #7
    was decent, better then expected 3/5.
     
  8. xobrandyxo123

    xobrandyxo123 Squib

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    Dec 28, 2015 #8
    It was alright, although It was a bit too syrupy for me. 3/5
     
  9. MsCalypso

    MsCalypso First Year

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    Dec 30, 2015 #9
    I liked Luna's POV because most don't manage to write her this well. Beyond that it was good enough, nothing too special. Short and sweet, not too in depth but not like it was lacking in detail either. 3/5
     
  10. Ptolemy XII

    Ptolemy XII Squib

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    Jan 3, 2016 #10
    Like everyone else said, it was short and sweet. It was just average.
     
  11. Perspicacity

    Perspicacity Destroyer of Worlds ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jan 3, 2016 #11
    Can confirm.

    A slice of life piece, decently written. I think it'd have been better without the smut and with a bit of conflict instead.

    3/5
     
  12. Halt

    Halt 1/3 of the Note Bros. Moderator

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    Jan 4, 2016 #12
    We're going to sound like a broken-record, but...yeah, decent fluff. Interesting premise, okay execution, nothing spectacular.
     
  13. Armani

    Armani Second Year

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    Jan 6, 2016 #13
    This fic was okay, it was one of the better fanfictions I have read where it is written from Luna's point of view. Nothing that is above average or outstanding. Though as almost all of you said, short and sweet. So I'd give it a 3/5