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Oneshot A Veela Involved Series of Unfortunate Events: By Surarrin and Shezza88 - T

Discussion in 'Humor' started by Shezza, Jan 16, 2007.

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  1. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    Jan 16, 2007 #1
    Title: A Veela Involved Series of Unfortunate Events
    Author: Shezza88 and Surarrin
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humour
    DLP Category: Humour
    Pairing: Allusions to Harry Potter / Gabrielle Delacour, and whatever else Jon and I come up with.
    Words: 3,115
    Published: January 15, 2007
    Status: Oneshot or Abandoned
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3344308/1/
    Summary: Harry Potter was enjoying Bill Weasley's prewedding party until young Gabrielle Delacour completely ruined his night. Now, Harry Potter must flee from an enraged Bill, a lovestruck Gabrielle and a horde of wellmeaning and misinterpreted Veela.


    As promised, Jon and I will continue with the story.

    Um...that's pretty much it, so...yeah.


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  2. HardcoreHobbit

    HardcoreHobbit Second Year

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    Jan 16, 2007 #2
    Heh, That's great. Looking forward to more of this.

    4.5/5
     
  3. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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    Sweet. It'll be nice to see where you go from the second update. 4.5/5
     
  4. huntedorange

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    Jan 16, 2007 #4
    Really good, gave me a great laugh. well done on the orginality too. 5/5
     
  5. Democable

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    Jan 17, 2007 #5
    yeah i have to agree with Harry in this story "Fuck me sideways" great story guy and gal (i think) hope to see more
     
  6. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 17, 2007 #6
    ..Why the fuck does everyone always think i'm a girl? :\
     
  7. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    Jan 17, 2007 #7
    I think he means me, Jon! :(

    Apparently, my name can be interpreted as feminine.....

    Edit: For the record, I am a male!
     
  8. The Dark Monarch

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    Jan 17, 2007 #8
    How is that a feminine name?
     
  9. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    Jan 17, 2007 #9
    Shezza is a derivitive slang of my last name. But it also resembles Shazza, a females name. Hence, feminine undertones.

    I really should get a new name.
     
  10. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    Jan 17, 2007 #10
    i enjoyed reading this. did not realize the translation for the frech part were at the end of the chapter. i kind of forgot authors like to put endnotes. so while i was reading, i was using free translation. other than that, this was a amusing read.
     
  11. BioPlague

    BioPlague The Senate DLP Supporter

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    Jan 17, 2007 #11
    Maltese Falcon
     
  12. Aekiel

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    Jan 17, 2007 #12
    Amusing, in a strange and wrong kind of way.
    "Fuck me sideways" is one of my favourite phrases, so that was awesome to see in a fic. :D

    Aekiel

    P.S. Shezza just reminds me of the word sheila, but I know better than to think he's a she. I haven't seen a female writer who could capture the essence of Stargate in a fic. No offence to the women out there.
     
  13. japanese_jew

    japanese_jew High Inquisitor

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    Jan 19, 2007 #13
    It's good, but I want to be sure that it keeps on going before voting. Collaborations often seem to fail miserably.
     
  14. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 19, 2007 #14
    Silence pitiful mortal! You shall tremble before the combined might Of I, The great invader Surarrin and the dirt child Shezza88! OBEY ME! OR SUFFER TEMPORAL DOOM!
     
  15. Nexus

    Nexus Denarii Host

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    Jan 19, 2007 #15
    *zaps the 'Great Invader' with a tazer and commends him and Shezza on this humor fic.
     
  16. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Jan 19, 2007 #16
    Good start, although I didn't like the way Harry was acting. I know it was suppose to be funny with him all frightened and what not, but it was kind of annoying and a little drawn out. Still to early to tell, IMO, but 4/5 so far.
     
  17. Jamven

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    Jan 20, 2007 #17
    Great story so far. I would have like to have seen Potter take on Bill in all his glory. 4.5/5
     
  18. jaspernoone

    jaspernoone First Year

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    Jan 20, 2007 #18
    Nice....its shapein up to be analright story, hopefully the normal crap that comes from a duel effort wont happen, and it will go all smooth like, and shezza, you think you'll ever redo harry potter and stargate?
     
  19. Moloch

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    o_o, Curious.

    Anyway, its too short to tell how good of a fic this is gonna be but I like what I see so far. Hope you update soon. :D
     
  20. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Jan 20, 2007 #20
    Enjoyed it so far (well, what there is to enjoy). Evil of Fleur to leave Harry to his fate...

    Shezza sound feminine because it ends in an 'a' (but most of the crowd knows that Shezza is no gal).

    (Maybe Blood and Shezza could exchange names ;))
     
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