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Harry Potter and the Death of Dobby by SuperLunchLady - K+

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Xiph0, Jul 29, 2007.

2.6500000953674/5, 20 votes
  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Jul 29, 2007 #1
    Title: Harry Potter and the Death of Dobby
    Author: SuperLunchLady (Lawl)
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Humor Crackfic
    DLP Category: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: None that I can see so far.
    Status: Completed
    Summary: Harry somehow gets a hold of a gun. And he shoots it off everytime someone says his name! This year at Hogwarts will be a crazy one for sure.
    Link: FF.nazi

    Complete, wtf-crack fic, but completely hilarious at the same time.

    Excerpt:
    :D
     
    Last edited: Jul 29, 2007
  2. deathinapinkboa

    deathinapinkboa Minister of Magic

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    Jul 29, 2007 #2
    Didn't manage to make me smile.
     
  3. Klael

    Klael Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Jul 29, 2007 #3
    Yeah, failed on that front. I don't know why you find it funny....
     
  4. xcel

    xcel Looked into the void

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    Jul 29, 2007 #4
    ....

    2/5
     
  5. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    Jul 29, 2007 #5
    Lol,, Zeeefo have a weird sense of humor..
     
  6. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    Jul 29, 2007 #6
    Complete waste of my time. 1/5.
     
  7. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Jul 29, 2007 #7
    THis fic is just win. >_> its so idiotic its stupidly epic.
     
  8. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Jul 30, 2007 #8
    If you can read that and not crack a smile, you need to take a trip to the Gun Store and end it.
     
  9. BioPlague

    BioPlague The Senate DLP Supporter

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    Jul 30, 2007 #9
    I couldn't stop laughing reading this, O.O. And xcel quoted a pretty amusing moment, as far as I'm concerned.

    I thought this was insanely dumbed down and ridiculously awesome like those 3 stories I linked back a couple of months ago. Hilarious.
     
  10. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    Jul 30, 2007 #10
    Heh, some of the quotes are classic.
     
  11. Lord Bill

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    Jul 30, 2007 #11
    What is this? :/ No <3 for lulz? I lulzed. And lulz>all.

    But points off for the writing style. Spells don't ALWAYS NEED CAPS. Somewhat disjoined, needs better flow and more consistency. But some how I doubt this story has a beta. Or got very many author rereads. But it needn't have. This is the type of fic written with the sleep depravation and a chemical rush. Which is usually bad, but for once it's crack fic which isn't about someone turning into a baby or getting drunk and having sex with a man. Or a game of spin the bottle. D8 It's about shooting a gun. ^_^

    Don't expect greatness, but good for a bit of lulzing. 4/5
     
  12. Le

    Le Fourth Year

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    Jul 30, 2007 #12
    That was absolutely hilarious. I laughed until I cried. Amazingly lulzy. Gangster Hermione was priceless! And chasing the bouncing second year. 5/5 for the monstrous lulz.
     
  13. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Jul 30, 2007 #13
    It was more of a wtf crackfic than a humorous one, in my opinion. Kinda reminds me of a train wreck.

    But, I do agree that the humor is there, so I give it a 3/5.
     
  14. Richard

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    Jul 30, 2007 #14
    I couldn't read past the first 10 paragraphs or so...its not that funny...and I laugh at almost anything...

    Richard.
     
  15. Element

    Element Seventh Year

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    Jul 30, 2007 #15
    Full of lulz! First chapter was mostly brilliant, got worse after that =/.

     
  16. Jeram

    Jeram Elder of Zion ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jul 30, 2007 #16
    Ah, this was insane. That first chapter was hilarious, just damned funny - but the rest couldn't keep up its ridiculously stupid funny start. If it was just the first chapter, I'd give it at least 4, but because of the not-quite-as-funny other chapters, it's really more of a 3/5.

    My favorite parts:
    - Ron kicking his own ass
    - Dobby's 83rd death
    - The devouring of Flitwick

    -J
     
  17. 007_rock

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    Jul 31, 2007 #17
    it was a bit funny, but not that humourous. Still its not everyday you see a crackfic. Cracked a smile or two, but not that much. Still.......

    2/5
     
  18. nonjon

    nonjon Alumni Retired Staff

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    Jul 31, 2007 #18
    Too much crack and not enough humor for me. I only got about halfway through the first chapter before giving up, but if I were going to vote it'd be 2/5. I smiled a couple times but didn't laugh. Probably just not in the mood for a crackfic right now.
     
  19. griselda

    griselda First Year

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    Parts of it were funny, but the pattern of Dobby-revival got boring very soon. Not the first one to do Marvin. 2/5
     
  20. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Aug 15, 2007 #20
    This story is totally abysmal.
    How anyone could find this hilarious is beyond me.
    1/5