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Harry Potter and the Trademark Dispute by Clell65619 - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by MrINBN, Nov 19, 2007.

  1. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    Title: Harry Potter and the Trademark Dispute
    Author: Clell65619
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor/Parody
    DLP Category: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: H/Hr
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Voldemort has finally pushed Harry too far. There is only one recourse open to the young hero. He must unleash the most horrifying, the most diabolical weapon in his arsenal. The mind of Hermione Granger.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3815485/1/

    Two words:

    I lol'd.

    EDIT: Sorry for linking to chapter 6, guys. Fix'd.
     
    Last edited: Nov 19, 2007
  2. thapagan

    thapagan High Inquisitor

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    Pokes fun at half a dozen or plot holes, get my vote for funniest cross over.
    (Harry Potter/dc-marvel comics)
     
  3. BioPlague

    BioPlague The Senate DLP Supporter

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    Thanks for linking to chapter six.
     
  4. Mechanicalchrist

    Mechanicalchrist Groundskeeper

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    pimp!Hermione and Harry do the nasty with Zatanna and Kim Possible? Count me in!
     
  5. bmatsea

    bmatsea Squib

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    while I didn't read this one on ff.net i did read it at ficwad. Almost from the start I found myself rolling on the floor in laughter. I did find it repetative in many chapters, but it didn't keep me from continuing. I have and will continue to recomend this to others who are looking for a laugh.

    my rating for this is 4/5.
     
  6. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    It was amusing for a while, but got rather repetitive. I liked it though.

    4 if it wasn't repetitive. 3.5 as it is.
     
  7. Kenshkrix

    Kenshkrix DA Member DLP Supporter

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    Quite amusing, I give it a 4/5. This story, plus the author's other stories, kept me amused for a few hours.
     
  8. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    I'll give it 2 for effort.
     
  9. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    It was alright. Made me laugh in a few area's, but thats about it. 3/5 for me.
     
  10. malaga

    malaga Auror

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    I really liked it. I was even inspired to create a sig for it. 4/5
     
  11. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    It started out funny, but then it went on and on and on and on.

    2/5
     
  12. It was quick and made me smile. Not much more I can say.
     
  13. Illnill

    Illnill First Year

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    Personally, I thought it was funny. It wasn't amazing, but it was enough to keep me amused for an hour or so.

    I rate it 4/5. Since it had multiple crossovers really. Voldemort getting beat up by the Powerpuff Girls was amusing.

    Normally, this amount of crossing-over would make me drop the story as soon as I see it. But since it's a parody, I kept reading it.

    I agree, it does get repetitive but at least it didn't go on for too long.
     
  14. The Mysterious Nobody

    The Mysterious Nobody Auror

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    It was amusing and funny first, but became repetitive very quickly. Still, managed to make me read it until the last chapter.

    Decent. Good but not great. 3/5
     
  15. Garret P.I.

    Garret P.I. Backtraced

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    Started out amusing and would have been okay as a one shot. But it just kept going on and on and becoming less funny as the same damn absurdist jokes piled up.

    Hint to the writer: jokes that play off an satirical twist like "let's tie Voldemort up in court" are only funny for so long. You went much much too long.

    Meh.
    2 out of 5 for effort, but that's being really incredibly generous. Would have been a 3.5 out of 5 for a oneshot.
     
  16. BlitzkriegAngel

    BlitzkriegAngel Vayash Moru DLP Supporter

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    Started out decent but went downhill fast. I'll give it 2/5 mostly for the effort but not worth it going to the library.
     
  17. Vesvius

    Vesvius High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    Eh. It made me chuckle a bit.

    3/5
     
  18. Saint Alia

    Saint Alia First Year

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    Entertaining but dragged after about four chapters, should have cut the length in half to make it more effective. Gave me a good laugh though. 3/5
     
  19. The Doctor

    The Doctor Unspeakable

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    Alright for the first five or so chapters, but goes downhill rapidly.

    Also, the author's habit of including the last paragraph of the last chapter into the next really pissed me off. Seemed like a shameless attempt to pad the story out.

    1/5.
     
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