Haha, haven't read it yet, but having seen what site it's on, I'm wary of proceeding. I'll come back when I've read more.

Edit: It certainly isn't bad. Despite my earlier reservations, 4/5.

 

I read this shortly after it was completed; I was splitting my time between ff.net and hpff at that point. My recollection is hazy at best, but I remember it as being well written and containing a believable decent from good!Harry to DarkLord!Harry. I'll refrain from an actual rating since its been a while, but memory says its in the 4/5 realm. Mind you my taste in fics was markedly worse then, so I'm not sure what the rating is honestly worth.

 

I could have sworn that this one has already passed through the site. I know that I've at very least started reading it.

 

I think that was a different story, with the same name.

 

and the same description?

I bet that Part one came through at some point, Part two isn't at all familiar, but I know I've read part one.

 

This story blows. 100000 words of Harry being a massive bitch. The depths to which his incompetence sinks defies words. Throwing his wand away, letting Voldemort control him, letting Malfoy use the cruciatus on him without doing anything ... literally, the story is hundreds of pages without harry doing a SINGLE thing except being victimized by various circumstances. When your story makes Canon Harry look like an assertive supercompetent hero you have reached the depths of shittiness.


Mega fail.

 

It's been a while since I read it but from what I can remember it's...average.

Sure the characterization and writing style is good and so is the general plot but there just isn't enough action to keep any reader interested for long (the high level of angst and Potter being a bitch doesn't help matters either) the only big thing it has going for it is the fact that it's finished (what compelled me to push through to the end at least). Plus the way Harry killed Ron was lame.

The chapters I liked most (or disliked least, take your pick) are the 14th and 15th but the author ruins the whole thing with the end, IMO. Tough I must admit I'm a little biased since I don't like the whole redemption crap. (I'm not even going to put a spoiler warning on that, it's that predictable.

3/5 (Not a great fic, but passable if you just want an excuse to procrastinate.)

 

I have to agree with Diggory. I read some of the first few chapters. And its pretty boring and Harry's a pussy who doesn't really do much. He acts like a defenseless child. I'd give it a 2/5 for the first story. Not even going to bother with the second.

 

Actually, complete edit here. This isn't horrible as I thought it would be, but there are some little things that annoyed me in the first chapter. After that, it is definitely picking up. I'm willing to give this a shot.

It seems to be worth a 3.5/5 as far as I've read.

 

I can remember reading this, a long time ago. Probably the first Dark!Harry I came across.

Might check it out.