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Ksai
02-04-2009, 05:18 AM
Title: Imminence
Author: Stalker of Stories (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1567335/Stalker_of_Stories)
Category: WIP
Rating: T
Pairings: I hope none...
Link: Teh Link (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4717501/1/Imminence)
Summary: Time-travel AU Falling into the frog oil pond was a big mistake, but soon Naruto finds himself enjoying what it brought him. Every cloud has a silver lining; just don't forget to watch the stormy side. The past is a dark and scary place. no pairing

I don't know what has happened to Naruto fandom, but the only author who is constantly updating is Kyuubi16 (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1370164/Kyuubi16) with his fucked up Celestial Avatar fic.
So I had to find something that was at least readable. And this story came out.

Frankly speaking - not the greatest fic. But still enjoyable. I liked the way Sandaime was treating Naruto - not tossing him in an interrogation cell and keeping an eye on him at the same time.
I also liked the way characters are portrayed. Naruto is not an uber God with l33t skills, he didn't loose his love for pranks and orange. Other characters are also portrayed rather nicely.

All in all - nice fic to read and to forget. 3.5 or 4 stars for sure.

PS
the only thing that may scare you from reading this story is that the authout of this fic is a Slash whore. Though she promissed not to make any parings, I have my doubts. Hope this will not turn in to another Naru/Kakashi smexy slash...

aikora666
02-04-2009, 12:33 PM
It seems to heading that way. You never know what the author might do once she has written slash. Regardless its a good fic, it goes pretty slow and if you don't want anything too angsty its a good choice to read.

It doesn't try to go over the top but the creativity in this work is not exactly amazing, however it is a straight read and that is certainly respectable.

4 Starts for sure.

Agnostics Puppet
02-05-2009, 01:20 PM
Well, its not bad. Definitely readable, thought there are a few spelling or grammatical errors here an there. How ever at the bottom of chapter 2 (or 3...cant remember) while she said there would be no pairing, she DID say that there would be crushes. We'll have to see just how far the 'crushes' go...