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the doctors origional story challenge (he hopes)

Discussion in 'Challenges' started by doc_gerbil, Jun 15, 2006.

  1. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    okay so. i got this idea while i was in the shower after talking to a couple of my chums at school. here goes.

    you have a seventh year harry post HBP looking for the horcruxes. he finds a copy of riddles diary ( a real one, not a magic one) and this diary reveals that harry is the sixth horcrux, made on the night of his parents death. so harry, in a fit of irrationality, turns the wand on himself but he doesnt die. instead he wakes up in the same world, but with a different harry's memories. only this harry was voldermorts most loyal death eater. the story would then become how he attempts to get back to voldermort without dumbledore knowing about it, and then how he slowly brings the wizarding world to its knees. the story has little requirements.

    evil harry must be significantly older than the harry his memories enter.

    He cannot be super powered.

    he cannot go light

    dumbledore must be at least a very good match for him strength wise.

    pairing is optional. he could remember dating bellatrix in the old world or something of that nature.

    hope someone can do this as i would be extremely interested and cant write diddly squat myself.
     
  2. Athenia

    Athenia Groundskeeper

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    Um, couple questions:

    Why is Riddle keeping a diary when he would be like 60 years old - or even older, since he must of not made it till he was resurrected?

    Also, if this is 7th year (and presumably post HBP from the sounds of it) why is Dumbledore alive and involved?
     
  3. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    you have found plot holes. like i said, just thought of it can use lots of revision
     
  4. se7en

    se7en Professor

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    Wait, it he is in the same world, Voldemort would try to kill him, even though he has the death eater memories
     
  5. Athenia

    Athenia Groundskeeper

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    Actually I think the biggest problem is that if Voldemort knows Harry is a Horcrux, why would he EVER try and kill Harry. Sure, Harry's a pain in the ass, but you don't go killing parts of your soul. Drain them of magic, give them the Draught of Living Death and stick them in a coma, but never knowingly try to destroy a piece of your soul, so Voldemort would have had to have written that entry (and figured it out) after book 5.
     
  6. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    the whole horcrux trhing was just a medium for the transportation of memories. it could happen any way really, i just thought that might be interesting. as to voldermort trying to kill him anyway... well i imagine that harry could convince him that he was loyal. he does it all the tim ein fanfiction.
     
  7. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Why on earth would Voldemort leave a diary lying around? Especially one with details about his precious horcruxes no less.

    And I think killing Harry is more important than preserving a single horcrux. He can just make another one or rely on the other five (or so he thinks). Perhaps he made Harry as a horcrux just in case, would be a good move in a way. Think of it this way: neither can live while the other survives. He kills Harry, he loses a horcrux but pretty much guarentees a life of immortality. Harry kills him, he doesn't die as Harry is the horcrux. It's a win-win situation, something a guy as clever as Voldy would think of.
     
  8. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    You talk with chums in the shower? :puke:
     
  9. nonjon

    nonjon Alumni Retired Staff

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    Erm... I thought the whole idea was that Voldemort knows the first part of the prophecy "The one with the power to vanquish..." pointing towards the idea that that fate/destiny felt the need to flat out state he was beatable. Not that Harry's the only one who can. You'd need the more important second part, about marking, either must die, and power he knows not etc. to know it's Harry and only Harry.

    It just seems... unlikely that he'd put a piece of his soul in his fate-announced enemy. Maybe he doesn't get selflessness, hence Harry willingly dying and taking Voldie with him is a power known not and Harry's the final horky. But for as much protections as there are on the other horcruxes, I'm not convinced he would go to the trouble of intentionally making the baby a horcrux, only to AK it. I mean he has made efforts to kill Harry right? In OotP didn't an animated statue block an AK? I'm more likely to believe he never intended to make Harry one, but it's possible he might have. And with the others he's willing to sacrifice the one Harry is, in exchange for getting rid of Harry.

    As for the challenge... well, it sounds more like a basic Harry turns dark suddenly, and the quickly assimilated knowledge is why. Whether it's sucking in Voldie's or in this case an alternate Harry's, it's just way to change/twist/super him and turn him evil. Doesn't feel like anything original to me. Just a few typical bits arranged in a way they've not been before (to the best of my knowledge).

    BTW... who goes and makes a kitten-killing userbar and spells the word mastrubate? I can excuse the made-up combination of every and time into one word, and with space an issue "U" can slide but honestly folks. Respect the sin of Onan.
     
  10. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    okay/ lets revise this. fuck the horcrux. i really didnt think it through and your al right, it would be pretty fucking stupid of him. im more interested in the rest of the idea. now that we have gotten the premise of fuck the horcrux down, lets talk about the other aspect of the story.

    ps, this is the first post i used spell check on.
     
  11. f77

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    In another world, Harry is allied with Voldemort and together they rule the world. But then Voldemort is defeated by Neville or Dumbledore or whatever and Harry's kingdom falls. When he is surrounded by enemies and when he is on the brink of defeat he uses an experimental device that his scientists were working on to have the soul travel into another AU and possess their bodies.

    It works, so evil!Harry possesses Wimpy!Harry. Now looking around he realizes that Voldemort would never agree to an alliance and decides to take things in his own hands. So then we could take it from here, and have a really cunning Harry trying to get his own alliance together by manipulating the DA to make his own "Death Army" from "Dumbledore's army..." It would be really cool if this happens when Wimpy Harry is at Hogwarts, and it is after year five. Any thoughts?
     
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