Abandoned A Slytherin Revolution by Overkill - M

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  1. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    Title: A Slytherin Revolution
    Author: OverKill
    Rating: M
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
    Chapters: 11
    Words: 118359
    Published: January 30, 2006 (Ficwad)
    Updated: December 12, 2007 (Ficwad)
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: "Following the events of OotP, Harry decides to take a pro-active approach to the war. With help from an unexpected source, Harry discovers something about himself which could change the Wizarding world itself! HarryTonksBellaNarcissa."
    Link Yahoo: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/irrational_intelligence
    Link Ficwad: http://ficwad.com/story/8856



    Checked by Minion, October 25, 2015
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  2. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Just finished reading the last chapter and I would like to recommend this story too. It's awesome.
     
  3. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I concur with the above posts.

    I just wish it updated more frequently
     
  4. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    its good... i think it could use more updates and could have been executed much better but it IS good..
     
  5. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Its fairly good. My only gripe is I hate the way Bella and Narc. act, they go from adults, to a scared infantile/juvenile state a bit too fast, as does the romance, but it is indeed still many, many times more believable then most stories like this out there.
     
  6. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    I can move pass that because the rest of the story is pretty good. Definitely one of the better ones out there.
     
  7. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Good story.

    It could do without Harry/Tonks, though. I mean, two 40 year old women hooking up with 16 year old boy are kinky enough, without their jelous 25 year old niece entering the picture.
     
  8. SmacksKiller

    SmacksKiller First Year

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    The way you put it down, it seems even more kinky
     
  9. ip82

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    And I didn't even mention that those two women are blood sisters, one married to a rich evil aristocrat and having a son that is her lover's age (at the moment, both being held prisoner by the lover, in form of a maggots), and the other being evel madman's servant, prison escapee and killer of the boy's godfather (who was incidently her own cousin as well).

    Man, can you just imagine family gathering with this pairings? Or 'meet her parents' thing?
     
  10. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw System God Admin

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    This is a decent story...a lot better than some of the shit that's posted on FF.Net nowadays.
     
  11. SmacksKiller

    SmacksKiller First Year

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    I've just finished reading the story and I have to say that it's great. I like the idea of a 'Harry is Salzar' kinda fic and I was wondering if people know where I can find some more.

    Onless Harry starts dabling in Necromancy the conversations are going to be a bit one-sided.
     
  12. Silent

    Silent Kinky Wench

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    Wow, this story is impressive.
    I mean, it isn't the only story with these plot elements, but it is one of very few that a nit-picking beta reader can enjoy without a spelling/grammar induced hearache. And it's the only one with all of these plot elements. :)
     
  13. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    Gone.

    Started a request at HPRecycleBin

    --bornagainpenguin
     
  14. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    WHAT! This stories gone as well? This is fucking bullshit! What the hell is wrong with those fucking admins... its clean out Harry Potter month!
     
  15. Gullible

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    Damn and I was intrested in this fic, bastards.
     
  16. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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  17. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    Yeah, I'm a member there... but still!
     
  18. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Maybe that Nazi hampster admin that runs FF.net gets off by deleteing the good fics. I think that I have read this fic, but don't remeber. I'm gonna try it again, eventually, but not now, cause I'm lazy.
     
  19. Lady Rebecca

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    I sent him a PM, I wonder if he will respond...
     
  20. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I'd like to read this. Well this sucks. (I hate getting worthless e-mail).


    Is it worth joining?