Amazing story. Entertaining, short and compete.

Like nonjon, I thought that this had been posted before, but I think it was just another squib!Harry story.

And it wasn't as good, if I remember correctly.

 

The son's names, letting Snape die, etc. is worth 4.8/5.

That last remaining .2 you could've made was for a longer story; Otherwise it was a great read.

 

This is probably the only Squib!Harry story I'll ever read and like. Especially enjoyed Harry's cleverness, ingenuity and straight forward behaviour. No complaints regarding humour and characterisation. The way Harry got himself through canon events by using brains rather than brawn was a very nice contrast to all the bad rehashes out there.

5/5

 

I thought this story was excellent, the only good story I have read where Harry was a squib. It could have been a little longer, but it was ok as it is.

5/5 from me.

 

Wonderful story, definetly 5/5. I adored the physical violence and range of well thought out devices. The only problem I found was the numerous errors in grammar.