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WIP Fishbowl By somaseur - T - Rick and Morty

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by ZombieHunter, Oct 18, 2015.

  1. ZombieHunter

    ZombieHunter DA Member

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    Title: Fishbowl
    Author: somaseur
    Rating: T
    Genre: General
    Status: WIP
    Fandom: Rick and Morty
    Pairings: None so far
    Summary: Rick's been left to rot in ultramax-security prison, leaving the Galactic Federation free to turn Earth into a tourist trap. The Smith family are trying their best to fit in back home, when Morty gets on the wrong side of Federation officials.
    Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/4948435/chapters/11359438


    Okay, I know all you R&M fans are suffering from withdrawal just like I am. So I decided to search the dregs of the internet for ANYTHING that would even slightly alleviate the tremors, insomnia, and irritability we're going to suffer for a year and a half maybe longer.

    What I found was a pleasant surprise. This story picks up after the end of season 2 as you can see from the summary. It has a fairly rapid update rate at once every 3-4 days. The characters are true to their show counterparts. I can read them in their show voices and there is no disconnect whatsoever. The world building that the author does is really cool as well; he/she makes sure to really explore the alien nature of the gromflamites in relation to the humans.

    Solid 4/5 for now.

    Well, that's all I can think of for now. Check it out and see for yourselves.
     
  2. Thaumologist

    Thaumologist Fifth Year ~ Prestige ~

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    It is a well written little thing - I didn't encounter any stumbling blocks in the form of glaring typos or canon discrepancies.

    There was a mention or two of the aliens in the floating HQ smiling, which threw me for a minute because I had assumed they were the ones with two mouth tentacles you normally see for the Federation, but that was it.

    The writing seems mostly consistent with the show. I like it, but I've only seen each episode a single time, so I'm not a canon god.

    A tentative 4/5, based on the promise of what's to come.
     
  3. esran

    esran Professor

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    I'm hesitant to rate this. I've been reading it, and it looks promising, but based on what's there now its not really all that good. If it was abandoned here I would give it a 2/5. If it continues and is good I could see it being a 4/5. For now I'll withhold judgement.
     
  4. sonny_yalin

    sonny_yalin Third Year

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    Nice find. I was actually looking for a little R&M as well and, unsurprisingly, I found nothing even resembling quality. So, as far as Rick and Morty fanfiction goes, this isn't bad. 2.5/5 for now, I think.

    On a related note, I think we might see some more Rick and Morty fanfics now that season 2 left us with some good divergent plot lines.
     
    Last edited: Oct 18, 2015
  5. esran

    esran Professor

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    The story has progressed a lot since I last posted. The story has consistently reasonable and interesting characterizations. In the latest chapters with evil Morty, the author does a good job of keeping the reader guessing about what his plan really is. I'm prepared at this point to rate this story a 4/5 and give it the dubious honor of being the best (read only good) Rick and Morty fan-fiction I've read.