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Complete Harry Potter and the Wastelands of Time by this_old_dance (joe6991) - M

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Oz, Feb 25, 2008.

  1. Celestin

    Celestin Half-Blood Prince

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    I should probably start with saying that it's great fic and I enjoy reading it. That said I've one question. Did Harry try save Dumbledore life in one of his many lives? He knows so much of Atlantis magic and it's hard to believed that there isn't something that could heal Voldemort's curse. In the end I'd be great help in war for Harry if he has someone who could fight on Voldemort level and don't die before real fight start.

    For some reason I love this line and it gave me inspiration for some non-fanfiction story.
     
  2. Sin Saiori

    Sin Saiori Death Eater

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    I'm not quite sure why, but I loved the entire part about Tessa. Almost felt like some vindication for Harry; live, love, and sit back and watch the world burn for a change. I guess after all the shit we read about him going through, it was nice to see him enjoying life a little, even if it was a past, past, way past one.
     
  3. squiz

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    This is a fantasic piece of fiction which puts a whole other perspective to the time travel theme.
     
  4. pvraghunath

    pvraghunath Muggle

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    Iam looking for a fic that I read long back.It contains harry going back in time after ginny kills of all their children and tries to poison him.He goes back in time to save all people like his grandparents from death ...can anyone tell me the name of the fic
     
  5. SKsniper128

    SKsniper128 Fifth Year

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    Wrong section kiddo, post in the Story Search.

    -SK
     
  6. Joe

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    What is this? Harry is a sleeping god and the last king of Atlantis? :awesome
     
  8. The Greek

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    Nothing less than awesome. The writing is flawless, the plot is great and the action scenes are perfect. 5/5 . Nothing more to be said, awesome.
     
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    Imagine my surprise at finding such a well written fic to read...

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  10. Salah

    Salah Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Joe... How is this Harry!Multi going to work out?

    Besides that this is one of my favorite fics.
     
  11. Joe

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    Give it time - in the sequel now, which is really just the second half of the same story.
     
  12. Sooner90

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    Damn it! I thought we had an update. Disappoint.:(
     
  13. Joe

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  14. Shinysavage

    Shinysavage Madman With A Box Prestige

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    Utterly awesome. You bastard. Reading this always leaves me with a vague feeling of inadequacy over my own writing...
     
  15. Jibril

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    That chapter blew my mind off. I want to Wastelands made into movie. That would be one, motherfucking awesome film :awesome

    The interactions between Chronos and Harry got me thinking and now I have couple crazy theories about what the hell is really going on.

    And this chapter motivated me to go back to translating Wastelands into Polish. Still stuck on chapter 3 & 4.

    Obligatory MOAR in 3, 2, 1... MOOOOAAAAR !!!
     
  16. Innomine

    Innomine Unspeakable Prestige DLP Supporter

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    I R HAS RLY LIEK!!!

    No seriously. Loved it. Good to see the plot progressing fast and hard once more. Looking forward to seeing more Harry/Dumbledore interaction now.

    And uh... yes, this definitely does have the potential to be the most fucking awesome movie ever conceived of. IF it had a budget like Avatar did. :p
     
  17. Shinysavage

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    Avatar's budget, and give it to Peter Jackson for the LOTR treatment.
     
  18. turtle7

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    Your writing is clear and concise. Your phrases are very beautiful. But the story is not very much based on Harry Potter so this is not fan fiction anymore. Nevertheless, this story is obviously popular so kudos for those who like this kind of fantasy stuff. As far as fantasies go, I prefer something more serious and less strange - Harry Potter gives a sense of normalcy. Dark Tower series, perhaps. But Bone men, and Chronos and what the fuck else just annoys me.
     
  19. Joe

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    An update! The masses must be told...

    Awesome chapter, as always. The bar scene was fantastic, though I'm still trying to work out the origins of Chronos/Saturnia, since you said in WbA that this chapter would more or less set whichever path you chose in stone. With the increasing mentions of Tessa, I feel she must be involved somehow...

    Can't wait for the next update, I'll probably need a cigarette after this fight:D