1. DLP Flash Christmas Competition + Writing Marathon 2024!

    Competition topic: Magical New Year!

    Marathon goal? Crank out words!

    Check the marathon thread or competition thread for details.

    Dismiss Notice
  2. Hi there, Guest

    Only registered users can really experience what DLP has to offer. Many forums are only accessible if you have an account. Why don't you register?
    Dismiss Notice
  3. Introducing for your Perusing Pleasure

    New Thread Thursday
    +
    Shit Post Sunday

    READ ME
    Dismiss Notice

Abandoned Something to Die For by Macavity the Mystery Cat - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by Koalas, Mar 16, 2009.

  1. Koalas

    Koalas First Year ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Sep 3, 2007
    Messages:
    46
    Location:
    Halifax
    High Score:
    2024
    Title: Something to Die For
    Author: Macavity the Mystery Cat
    Rating: T
    Status: Abandoned
    Chapters: 10
    Words: 56,639
    Updated: July 28, 2010
    Published: June 23, 2006
    Summary:Morino Ibiki was thought to be the last choice for a jonin sensei, but thanks to the efforts of Umino Iruka, he finds himself saddled with a familiar team of new genin...

    This story gets a tentative recommendation. I had forgotten about it, but then it updated and I remembered the sheer awesome potential I thought the story had had. Read and see if it tickles your fancy as it has mine.


    Checked: June 7, 2012
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jun 7, 2012
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

    Joined:
    Jun 4, 2005
    Messages:
    6,141
    Gender:
    Male
    Yeah, I was kinda surprised it updated. Been awhile.

    It's okay but not that great. Good enough if you want to waste some time on something that won't melt your brain. Seems to get a little weirder the more chapters are put out.

    I mean... what the hell is with Kisame's brother/cousin/whatever?
     
  3. meatzman2

    meatzman2 Backtraced

    Joined:
    Nov 7, 2008
    Messages:
    526
    Location:
    Melbourne, Australia
    Well, I loved it. It's certainly not up there with the very best, but it is certainly very good. Good characterization, innovative and fairly well thought-out OCs.

    The whole Naruto under Ibiki or ANBU thing has been done, but this concept of the whole of Team 7 under T&I is one I find interesting. The Naruto/Genjutsu thing is one I enjoyed as well.

    5/5 because I enjoyed it so much. As for the broader general quality of story it probably only rates 4.
     
  4. Lokesin

    Lokesin Slug Club Member

    Joined:
    Jan 22, 2008
    Messages:
    198
    Location:
    In front of a glowing monitor
    Incredible. It's a necro-fic. I'd forgotten the last time I saw one pulled back up with updates from that far back.

    I loved this story then, and I like where it's going now.
     
  5. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

    Joined:
    Jun 15, 2008
    Messages:
    394
    Location:
    Sin City
    Hopefully Macavity will be updating a bit more, because this is probably one of my favorite different!sensei stories.
     
  6. AntiChrist

    AntiChrist Professor

    Joined:
    Sep 17, 2008
    Messages:
    479
    It's very nice. The interactions are interesting and none of the characters are too overdone or over-powered. Only real problem is the near non-existent updates. If Macavity would update more regularly, it would definitely be one of my favorites. 4/5
     
  7. tywyll fiach

    tywyll fiach First Year DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Mar 1, 2006
    Messages:
    33
    Location:
    New Brunswick
    I like this, but I find all the #'s in place of swearing very annoying. If you're going to swear in a fic,at least write it properly for fuck sake. However,apart from that little quibble,I like it. 4/5
     
Loading...
Similar Threads
  1. crimson sun06
    Replies:
    14
    Views:
    10,035